Talk:Alan Shepard/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 09:18, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
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He was one of many famous descendants of Mayflower passenger Richard Warren- I'd put this after his parents' names. It reads oddly where it is.
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although he did not go so far as to give up the cocktails or the philandering- this just sorta comes out of nowhere...some explanation needed beforehand- Any idea where it should be mentioned? Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:21, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
- Well, is there any more info? It just seems a really odd bomb to drop in without some explanation of him cheating on his wife or drinking a lot (if there is info, then it could go immediately beforehand.) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:38, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- Any idea where it should be mentioned? Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:21, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
There are some segments of prose that should be reworded to distance themselves from this page- Originally the article was just a copy of his JSC bio. Much of that was lost as the article was improved, but what remains is referenced, and the article includes the disclaimer:
- This article incorporates public domain material from websites or documents of the National Aeronautics and Space Administration.
Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:55, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Aaah ok, my bad. Alrighty then.....
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