Talk:Nighat Arif

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Review: May 21, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Nighat Arif appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 May 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that BBC Breakfast's resident doctor Nighat Arif has advocated for more women to be given vibrators for medical reasons?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/May. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Nighat Arif.

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Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 19:43, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that BBC Breakfast's resident doctor Nighat Arif made her first television appearance while on maternity leave? Source: https://www.oxmag.co.uk/articles/you-will-see-the-doctor-now-star-of-social-and-mainstream-media-dr-nighat-arif/
- ALT1: ... that the i suggested that Nighat Arif's 2023 medical guide contained the first published images of lichen sclerosus on non-white skin? Source: https://inews.co.uk/inews-lifestyle/meet-british-muslim-gp-discuss-vaginal-dryness-living-room-2521464
- ALT2: ... that BBC Breakfast's resident doctor Nighat Arif has advocated giving more women vibrators, on the grounds that orgasms help pelvic floor muscles, lower blood pressure, and release endorphins? Source: per ALT1
- ALT2a: ... that BBC Breakfast's resident doctor Nighat Arif has advocated giving more women vibrators for medical reasons?
- Reviewed:

Created by Launchballer (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 216 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Laun chba ller 12:46, 14 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

I've simplified ALT2 to make it snappier; see ALT2a. If you like it, I suggest you amend the article to use the phrase "medical reasons (which really is just a summary of your longer hook). Schwede 66 18:48, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done.--Laun chba ller 18:57, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review:

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: No QPQ provided on the nomination page. Otherwise, looks good. Preference for ALT 2a. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:08, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Template:Did you know nominations/N661US, I did it at the time but forgot to add it.--Laun chba ller 12:11, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. Looks good to go now! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:17, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

Passed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:11, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Nighat Arif/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Launchballer (talk · contribs) 13:40, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 20:57, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

An interesting short article about what is clearly a remarkable person.

Comments[edit]

I've fixed one or two very small items rather than spend ages explaining them here.

Lead

Maybe remove one of the "later"s from the lead, a bit repetitive.

Cut the first.

Split the sentence "She began making... in August 2023", probably into 3 sentences.

Split into three.

Media career

Remove the phrase "to talking openly", doesn't add anything.

Removed "talking openly about" as I felt that made better grammatical sense.

"disperse information quickly" is a bit odd, as "disperse" connotes "to scatter to the four winds" or "to reduce the impact of a mob by scattering it", when you mean the opposite. Maybe "spread..." would work better.

I meant "dispense".

Again, please split the rambling sentence In August 2023, the Times noted that she "often subtitles or narrates her posts about female health in Punjabi and Urdu", languages for which the only words for menopause translate to "barren" and "off the rag",[15] and later that month the i wrote that she had nearly half a million followers on the platform., probably into 3 sentences. A sentence should do exactly one job.

I've split it at "off the rag" as I think it makes sense to keep all the stuff the Times said together.

The Knowledge

Once more, please split the very long sentences: at the moment the whole section consists of just two. The first is 61 words, the second 105, with Flesch-Kincaid reading level as "College graduate".

Now four.

Personal life and views

Another long sentence to sort out in there.

Split.

Images[edit]

Portrait is not yet reviewed on Commons. It would be helpful if you could put a link to the place where AstraZeneca UK has put its CC-by-3.0 license statement here and on the image's Commons page to enable verification.

On Vimeo there is a "More" button, which appears to be CC-BY-SA (the person links to [1], although images is something I know next to nothing about). There seems to already be a link to that clip on Commons.--Laun chba ller 00:21, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oh good, that's fine then.

Sources[edit]

[1] is from Instagram, which Wikipedia by default considers a unreliable source. In this case it is a primary source (Arif herself) and used only to confirm her date of birth, which is acceptable.

The spotchecks I tried all check out.

[10] mentions she was a finalist for "Muslim Woman of the Year". I think this should be in the article.

Wasn't able to find much more about it, so added to Personal life and views.

Summary[edit]

This is almost ready for GA now, just a couple of small details left to sort out. There is no QPQ here at GAN but of course I'd be delighted if you could review one of my articles from the queue. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:59, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

- Super, great work. It's a GA. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:10, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.