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This page holds approved nominations that are waiting to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page. Following DYK approval, nominations are processed and moved into a Prep area, and from there, prep sets are promoted to a queue, and then to the main page.
To create a new nomination or to see those that are yet to be approved, see Template talk:Did you know. For the discussion page see WT:DYK. Click on the link to go directly to the Special occasion holding area.
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Section | # of Hooks | # Verified |
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February 28 | 1 | 1 |
March 14 | 1 | |
March 19 | 1 | |
March 25 | 1 | 1 |
March 30 | 1 | |
April 5 | 1 | |
April 14 | 3 | 1 |
April 15 | 2 | 1 |
April 16 | 2 | 2 |
April 17 | 2 | 2 |
April 18 | 5 | 5 |
April 19 | 6 | 4 |
April 20 | 4 | 4 |
April 21 | 6 | 5 |
April 22 | 3 | 2 |
April 23 | 6 | 6 |
April 24 | 11 | 9 |
April 25 | 7 | 2 |
April 26 | 11 | 5 |
April 27 | 11 | 6 |
April 28 | 13 | 9 |
April 29 | 10 | 4 |
April 30 | 16 | 8 |
May 1 | 11 | 6 |
May 2 | 8 | 1 |
May 3 | 7 | 5 |
May 4 | 7 | 5 |
May 5 | 8 | 4 |
May 6 | 10 | 5 |
May 7 | 9 | 6 |
May 8 | 9 | 3 |
May 9 | 7 | 1 |
May 10 | 10 | 6 |
May 11 | 2 | |
Total | 212 | 119 |
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- See Wikipedia:Did you know/Preparation areas for full instructions.
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Nominations[edit]
Special occasion holding area[edit]
May 23[edit]
David Raymond, Jonathan Stoklosa, Cheryl Hamilton, Kevin Tresolini, Eric Cannon, Gary Chelosky, Marcy Levine, Caitlin Van Sickle, Cliff Brumbaugh
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that this year's inductees to the Delaware Sports Museum and Hall of Fame include someone with Down syndrome who can lift up to 425 pounds (193 kg) (pictured, left), an "average gymnast" turned one of the world's best gymnastics judges, Delaware's "preeminent sportswriter", the state's "greatest high hurdler", the man who "practically invented the modern sports mascot", a record-setting 10-year-old, a U.S. champion gymnast, an Olympic field hockey player, and a professional baseball player in five countries?Source: see all the respective articles- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Grave with the Hands; Template:Did you know nominations/National Women's Basketball Association; Template:Did you know nominations/Iona Allen; Template:Did you know nominations/Drew Golz (2/3); Template:Did you know nominations/New England Revolution in international competition; Template:Did you know nominations/Ukraina, North Dakota (2/2); Template:Did you know nominations/List of presidents of Centre College; Template:Did you know nominations/Chesterfield Market
- Comment: Trying my craziest DYK nomination ever! Have been working on all the inductees for this year, only just realized that it'd probably be an awesome mega-hook (there has been precedent for similar things in the past; see Wikipedia:Did you know/Multiple Article Hook Hall of Fame).
Note that two do not yet qualify (Van Sickle, Brumbaugh - why I haven't bolded yet), as I still need to 5x expand them, but I needed to make the nomination now so the oldest one (Raymond) would still be eligible.I also have a date request if this goes through: the hall of fame is inducting the mentioned sportspeople on May 23 this year. I think it would be really neat if this could be scheduled for then. Thanks!
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 152 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing.
- Despite what the bot/tool says, you owe 10 QPQs as you seem to already be aware.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:10, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for offering to review – just note that
Van Sickle andBrumbaugh are not yet ready – I'll make sure to 5x them within the next three days (nominated now so as to not exhaust 7-day eligibility of Raymond). BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:12, 21 March 2024 (UTC)- Gotcha. Well done.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:23, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for offering to review – just note that
- I forgot to say let me know when all the articles are ready for evaluation.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
- 5x expanded Caitlin Van Sickle (calculated it needed to be 7,725+ – currently ~8,200). Just Brumbaugh left to do. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:42, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- Expanding Brumbaugh is taking longer than I thought, but I'm almost certain I can have it done by the end of tomorrow. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:26, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
- Was able to finish Brumbaugh tonight. Needed to be 10,725, now is at ~13,000 bytes. @TonyTheTiger: All the articles are ready for review now. (Still have to do the QPQs, of course). Also, tell me your thoughts of the date request I mentioned? Thanks! BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
Collapsing individual article reviews as everything was addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:50, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
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- The date request window is 6 weeks, I believe. So you can only request dates within 6 weeks of the date that you nominate a hook. You can read further about special occaision requests at WP:DYKSO.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- Crap! I was never aware of that! And just two weeks off. Is it possible to IAR, something? One of the main reasons I nominated this was in hope that it could be set for that date... BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:06, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- It says
exceptions to the six-week limit can be implemented by way of a local consensus at WT:DYK.
I'll open a discussion about it once the reviewing is done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- It says
- Crap! I was never aware of that! And just two weeks off. Is it possible to IAR, something? One of the main reasons I nominated this was in hope that it could be set for that date... BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:06, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- The date request window is 6 weeks, I believe. So you can only request dates within 6 weeks of the date that you nominate a hook. You can read further about special occaision requests at WP:DYKSO.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- Your hook is generally confirmed with all facts cited properly. Please tweak it per my suggestions and propose new ALTs.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review - will make sure to get to everything soon. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- All articles are well-cited.
- All articles are generally neutral.
- A few articles need better paraphrasing. Some elements of the hook need to be more concise. I have also made some cleanup suggestions surrounding infobox improvement possibilities.
- QPQs pending.
- Can someone with the perms switch the image to this high-quality version found here? I don't have the permissions. Bremps... 06:19, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:26, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: I believe I've addressed each of your comments about the quality of the articles. I also completed all 10 QPQs. Let me know if there's any other issues. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:01, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: In case you didn't get the previous ping. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:55, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
- QPQs look good although you have not signed off on my third article yet.
- Where is the latest hook?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:51, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: Responded to Brumbaugh; you said for Cannon the medals thing was something for outside of DYK, so I hope you'll be alright if I just make that a task for later?; as for the ALTs, here appear to be the possibilities:
- ALT3 ... that this year's inductees to the Delaware Sports Museum and Hall of Fame include someone with Down syndrome who has lifted 425 pounds (193 kg) (pictured, left), an "average gymnast" turned Olympic Games gymnastic judge, a "preeminent sportswriter", the state's "greatest high hurdler", the man who "practically invented the modern sports mascot", a record-setting 10-year-old, a U.S. champion gymnast, an Olympic field hockey player, and a professional baseball player in five countries?
- ALT4 ... that this year's inductees to the Delaware Sports Museum and Hall of Fame include someone with Down syndrome who has lifted up to 425 pounds (193 kg) (pictured, left), an "average gymnast" turned Olympic Games gymnastic judge, a "preeminent sportswriter", the state's "greatest high hurdler", the man who "practically invented the modern sports mascot", a record-setting 10-year-old, a U.S. champion gymnast, an Olympic field hockey player, and a professional baseball player in five countries?
- ALT5 ... that this year's inductees to the Delaware Sports Museum and Hall of Fame include someone with Down syndrome who has lifted up to 425 pounds (193 kg) (pictured, left), an "average gymnast" turned Olympic Games gymnastic judge, a "preeminent sportswriter", the state's "greatest high hurdler", the "inventor" of the modern sports mascot, a record-setting 10-year-old, a U.S. champion gymnast, an Olympic field hockey player, and a professional baseball player in five countries?
- ALT6 ... that this year's inductees to the Delaware Sports Museum and Hall of Fame include someone with Down syndrome who has lifted 425 pounds (193 kg) (pictured, left), an "average gymnast" turned Olympic Games gymnastic judge, a "preeminent sportswriter", the state's "greatest high hurdler", the "inventor" of the modern sports mascot, a record-setting 10-year-old, a U.S. champion gymnast, an Olympic field hockey player, and a professional baseball player in five countries?
- Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:13, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: Responded to Brumbaugh; you said for Cannon the medals thing was something for outside of DYK, so I hope you'll be alright if I just make that a task for later?; as for the ALTs, here appear to be the possibilities:
- First, the image file is properly PD.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:48, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
- I'll leave it to the promoter to decide between the various tweaks. I would prefer the shortest just because of the overall length of the hook, but the promoter is free to make the final choice. I remain intrigued and await further detail on Cannon as time permits. Nothing is necessary now though, but keep in mind when this goes on the main page, it may be the most pageviews that any of these pages ever receives. You may want to put everything you can into it before the main page run to get feedback from all those eyeballs. Everything is in order for a DYK run. -TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:57, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
- Great. Thanks for the reviews. I'm going to open a discussion about getting this featured on the requested date, as mentioned at the DYK guidelines. So to anyone looking at this: don't promote yet! BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:28, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
- Follow-up: the consensus was in favor of allowing the special occasion request, so this can be promoted for the requested date when the appropriate prep becomes available sometime in the next few days. (Promoter: please be sure to add a comment to the hook in prep so people know it's a special occasion request and don't try to move it to another date. Thanks.) BlueMoonset (talk) 04:01, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Great. Thanks for the reviews. I'm going to open a discussion about getting this featured on the requested date, as mentioned at the DYK guidelines. So to anyone looking at this: don't promote yet! BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:28, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
Nozawana
- ... that the Japanese Nozawana plant (pictured) got its name from skiers visiting Nozawaonsen impressed by the pickled turnip?
- Source: "野沢菜物語" [Nozawana story]. Nozawa Onsen Mountain Resort Tourism Bureau (in Japanese). Retrieved 2020-05-13.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 115 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.--evrik (talk) 03:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC).
- AGF on the source due to the language barrier. The hook is certainly interesting, but it feels like it's missing a few words; surely "skiers visiting Nozawaonsen who were impressed by the pickled turnip?" Also, within the article, I'm very confused what the phrase "called the plant a turnip (turnip)" means. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:42, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- The word in parentheses should have been edited out. The sentence in question,"local villagers called the plant a turnip, but visiting skiers from the city who visited a local ski resort were so impressed by the pickled turnip that they nicknamed it "Nozawanazuke"." How to say that they skiers came, ate the local pickled food product and gave it a new name? --evrik (talk) 15:50, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you! And hmmm... how about "... that skiers at Nozawaonsen were so impressed by its pickled turnip they it was named the "Nozawa vegetable"? Since it being Japanese isn't strictly needed to understand the story (and probably would be inferred), but na meaning vegetable might not be clear from context. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:06, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Alt1 "... that skiers visiting Nozawaonsen were so impressed by its pickled turnip they dubbed it the "Nozawa vegetable"? --evrik (talk) 16:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good to me! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:35, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- The word in parentheses should have been edited out. The sentence in question,"local villagers called the plant a turnip, but visiting skiers from the city who visited a local ski resort were so impressed by the pickled turnip that they nicknamed it "Nozawanazuke"." How to say that they skiers came, ate the local pickled food product and gave it a new name? --evrik (talk) 15:50, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
June 28[edit]
Stonewall Inn
- ... that names in the Stonewall Inn's visitor logbook included Donald Duck, Elizabeth Taylor, and Judy Garland? Source: Carter, David (2004). Stonewall: The Riots that Sparked the Gay Revolution. St. Martin's Press. pp. 69-70.
- ALT1: ... that after the original Stonewall Inn closed in 1969, its space was used by a bagel shop, Chinese restaurant, and clothing store? Source: Multiple, see article
- ALT2: ... that the Stonewall Inn may have been named after a lesbian autobiography? Source: Wang, Hansi Lo (May 30, 2016). "Long A Symbol, Stonewall Inn May Soon Become Monument To LGBT Rights". NPR.
- ALT3: ... that the Stonewall Inn was originally two horse stables? Source: Stonewall (Report). National Register of Historic Places, National Park Service. February 16, 2000. p. 10.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dadang Supriatna
- Comment: I also know that this is unlikely to happen, but can I request that this run on June 28 (the first full day of the Stonewall riots)?
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 650 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Epicgenius (talk) 12:21, 15 April 2024 (UTC).
- Ooh, Stonewall! Article eligibility and condition checks out, became a good article a few days ago. I like the ALT0 here best, though I would suggest linking those names. Assuming good faith on the sourcing. Obviously, going to have to wait til the QPQ is resolved to officially check this off. And I think June 28 would be a wonderful day for this hook. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:18, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Generalissima. I've now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 14:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go here! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius and Generalissima:, as it is over six weeks until the proposed date (and was something like ten weeks at nomination approval) an exemption needs to be obtained at WT:DYK per WP:DYKSO. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:53, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go here! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Generalissima. I've now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 14:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
Approved nominations[edit]
Articles created/expanded on February 28[edit]
Kirby: King of Comics
* ... that Kirby: King of Comics contains original artwork made by Jack Kirby (pictured) which Mark Evanier obtained while working for him? Source: [6], [7]>
** ALT1: ... that Mark Evanier was a good friend of Jack Kirby (pictured) which gave him access to lots of original art to include in his biography? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12
** ALT2: ... that while writing Kirby: King of Comics, once Mark Evanier hit a word count of 250,000 he considered the book nowhere near finished? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12
- ALT3: ... that Kirby: King of Comics contains original artwork made by Jack Kirby (pictured) which Kirby's family reobtained the following a public campaign and legal threats? Source: [8], [9]
- ALT4: ... that Mark Evanier once worked for Jack Kirby (pictured) which gave him access to lots of original art to include in his biography? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12
- ALT4: ... that Mark Evanier advetised his book as the first biography about Jack Kirby (pictured) despite another one being published four years earlier? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12
- Reviewed:
- Comment: QPQ not needed fifth nom
5x expanded by OlifanofmrTennant (talk). Self-nominated at 20:54, 1 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Kirby: King of Comics; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Expanded 5x, from 319 to 1614 characters; long enough. Well-sourced, neutral, no plagiarism. I like the first hook; its source is reliable. Great image; I agree that's a better one than the book cover. Well done taking a stub to a short-ish and salvageable article. Good to go. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Figureskatingfan (talk • contribs) 21:12, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
I have pulled this nom from prep, as it fails to include a summary of the book's contents and thus fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. It also contains at least two errors, one which says Evanier "obtained" artworks from Kirby "while working for him" - he only obtained access, and not apparently while working for him, and another which says the book was met with "positive" reviews when in fact it was panned by The Guardian critic. The article clearly needs more work before it can be featured, if it should be featured at all given the apparent errors. Gatoclass (talk) 09:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
- Gatoclass I've begun working on a summary of the books contents, its been a while sinces I've read the book so I'll have to look over it again Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:22, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- Pinging nominator OlifanofmrTennant, reviewer Figureskatingfan, and promoter PrimalMustelid. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:15, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
- There has been no improvement of the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: I feel that their has been improvement of the article I've just been struggling to find content supported backed up by sources.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Upon reviewing policy I belive that it would be covered under WP:DYKCITEQuestions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 02:11, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- There has been no improvement of the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
I took a look at this. The summary is extremely short, to the point of remaining woefully incomplete. Still fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. Time to pass on this as the nominator just isn't accepting what they are being told.4meter4 (talk) 13:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: I've expanded it a bit how much would be needed? I fear that to much would just be a mini biography of Jack Kirby. It took me a while to begin writing the summary as I didnt have my copy at the time.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:40, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- OlifanofmrTennant The summary needs to present a complete but not overly detailed picture of the book's entire plot. It should provide enough detail to give the reader a general picture of the book's contents. It should not be too vague (which it currently is) nor should it be overly detailed. It should be a summary. See MOS:PLOT and Wikipedia:Summary style for guidance. I would suggest removing the bulleted point by chapter. It isn't entirely necessary to break down the content into chapters. It would be better to concentrate on narrative. What is the story being told? Summarize that story. Since this is a biography it should be biographical. Best.4meter4 (talk) 14:57, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- See also Wikipedia:WikiProject Books/Non-fiction article on summaries for non-fiction such as biographies. It might be helpful to think about how you would summarize the book if you were writing for a summary on the book jacket of the back of the book, or if you were having to write a book summary for an English class, or an abstract for a journal article book review in which a summary is provided as part of a review. All of those require narrative and details but still succinct writing with an overview scope. You should be able to craft one or two paragraps of prose that summarizes the book's narrative arc. 4meter4 (talk) 15:26, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- OlifanofmrTennant The summary needs to present a complete but not overly detailed picture of the book's entire plot. It should provide enough detail to give the reader a general picture of the book's contents. It should not be too vague (which it currently is) nor should it be overly detailed. It should be a summary. See MOS:PLOT and Wikipedia:Summary style for guidance. I would suggest removing the bulleted point by chapter. It isn't entirely necessary to break down the content into chapters. It would be better to concentrate on narrative. What is the story being told? Summarize that story. Since this is a biography it should be biographical. Best.4meter4 (talk) 14:57, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Nominator has not made any movement on this since the above discussion. It's time to close this for failing WP:DYKCOMPLETE.4meter4 (talk) 15:36, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have. I've just been struggling to do so as I havent written a book article before.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:21, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
I took a re-look and I think the summary is now sufficiently in-depth to pass WP:DYKCOMPLETE. I would have preferred a paragraph structure with smoother prose, but that is no reason to hold up a DYK review. All other DYK criteria check out. However, portions of both the Alt1 and Alt2 hook facts are not currently in the article. The quote "nowhere near finished" is not in the article, and there is no mention of a friendship between Evanier and Kirby. For this reason, only the original hook can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 16:37, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: I made a few new hooks as those arent the best. Also since ALT0 is wrong I rephrased it. Also ALT2 is included now.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:10, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- OlifanofmrTennant Please add citations directly after each hook fact. Any sentence with a fact in a hook must have a citation to pass DYK review. In just rechecking Alt2, the sentence with the hook fact lacks a citation and the text that's in quotes in the hook is not in quotes in the article. Is this a quote? If it is it needs to be in quotes in the article's prose. If it's not a quote then it should not be in quotes within the hook sentence. I'm not going to even look at the other hooks until you have fixed this one and can assure me all the necessary citations are in place. Ping me when you are ready.4meter4 (talk) 17:45, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: its there, its the gaurdian source. But reguardless I used the citation again higher in the paragraph.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:52, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- @OlifanofmrTennant In looking at the Alt2 hook fact, it is not a quote of Evanier directly but it is a quote of The Guardian. The text needs to attribute it to The Guardian in quotes in both the article and the hook, or its a problem with WP:Plagiarism. This needs to be fixed. We can't promote an article with plagiarism issues. Now that I've seen this, I'm going to have to go through all the sources and make sure there aren't other issues of non-attributed text or close paraphrasing. I had trusted the original reviewer had done this, but I'm going to have to re-review with a careful eye on any copyright violations. In the mean time, please put the attributions for this quote in the article. Also, I was asking earlier for you to confirm that all the citations were in place for the many alt hooks you proposed. I don't want to have to keep coming back here and asking again for more citations. Every hook fact must have a citation immediately following the sentence of the hook fact. This may mean we duplicate citations in ways that we may not do when not featuring an article at DYK. This is one of those hoops that DYK requires, even if it seems redundant.4meter4 (talk) 19:12, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: its there, its the gaurdian source. But reguardless I used the citation again higher in the paragraph.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:52, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- OlifanofmrTennant Please add citations directly after each hook fact. Any sentence with a fact in a hook must have a citation to pass DYK review. In just rechecking Alt2, the sentence with the hook fact lacks a citation and the text that's in quotes in the hook is not in quotes in the article. Is this a quote? If it is it needs to be in quotes in the article's prose. If it's not a quote then it should not be in quotes within the hook sentence. I'm not going to even look at the other hooks until you have fixed this one and can assure me all the necessary citations are in place. Ping me when you are ready.4meter4 (talk) 17:45, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
New reviewer needed. I'm not seeing any more close paraphrasing, but I'd like a second set of eyes on this just to make sure I didn't miss anything.4meter4 (talk) 22:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
@Launchballer, OlifanofmrTennant, 4meter4, and AirshipJungleman29: I'm having to reopening this, as it looks like the point made by Gatoclass above, that the hook mentions that Evanier "obtained" artworks from Kirby "while working for him" was not addressed, and that hook is not supported by the article. All I can see is "Evanier worked for Kirby and was a friend of his, giving him additional insight while writing the book", which isn't the same thing. On a more minor note, the second paragraph of the "Development" section is cited entirely to the book itself, which would be a WP:PRIMARY source. For a statement like "Kirby's family re-obtained the art following a public campaign to have them returned and legal threats from Kirby" I'd think a secondary source highly preferable. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 19:21, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Amakuru: Added. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 20:38, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good. – Illegitimate Barrister (talk • contribs), 05:07, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on March 25[edit]
Hal Malchow
... that Hal Malchow briefly worked as a securities lawyer, but left because writing contracts defending against fraud was more boring than scheming them?Source: Issenberg, Sasha (2013). The Victory Lab: The Secret Science of Winning Campaigns. ISBN 9780307954800. p. 2: "except for a brief detour into securities law that ended when he realized that writing the contracts to guard against complex financial schemes was less fun than trying to hatch them."- ALT1:
... that Hal Malchow was detained in a Lima, Peru, airport because he was accused of smuggling cocaine in his arm cast?Source: "Three Americans held in Peru pending drug investigation outcome". The Greenville News. Vol. 113, no. 25. AP News. January 25, 1987. p. 3A. - Reviewed:
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.SWinxy (talk) 23:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The article presents a comprehensive overview of Malchow's life, career, and contributions to political consulting, and meets the newness, length, sourcing, neutrality, and copyvio-free criteria. Offline sources were accepted in good faith. he article and hook meet all the required criteria for inclusion in the DYK section of Wikipedia, with no subjective issues identified. el.ziade (talkallam) 09:41, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- unpromoted per Special:Diff/1219998585 RoySmith (talk) 13:07, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Striking ALT1 due to WP:BLP issues; original hook struck because "scheming them" is confusing given the context: what does scheming a contract even mean? Please propose a new hook. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:43, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- I strongly disagree with you that ALT1 is "negative" and a BLP issue. The wording is clear that he was accused, not convicted, of smuggling cocaine. It plainly does not violate BLP because it's sourced to the Associated Press, considered generally reliable at WP:RSP. Being accused of smuggling narcotics in an arm cast is unusual, quirky, absurd. ALT1 can be modified slightly to say that Malchow "was once detained" to lessen a perception that crime is Malchow's MO. But I find it odd to read it this way. SWinxy (talk) 18:06, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- SWinxy, it isn't just me: the consensus I'm seeing in the WT:DYK thread is that ALT1 is both negative and a BLP issue. "Accused" and "detained" both sound bad, and to add "once" would simply be read by most people that it happened in the past, not that it happened to him only once in his life: either way, he's painted as a drug smuggler on Wikipedia's front page. I strongly advise you to come up with an ALT2 that features a different set of facts, since ALT1—though you clearly like it—isn't going to be accepted at DYK. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:49, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- The two concurring with you made their replies before I addressed your claim of it being a BLP issue. It's unfair to mark "consensus!" at the time right before I made my rebuttal to allow my point to be considered, and without responding directly to the rebuttal of the argument you made. I liked it and think it's interesting, yeah. el.ziade seemed to think so too in approving it, PrimalMustelid promoted it, and RoySmith said that
I don't see anything in particular that's a problem here
in opening it up for discussion. Pinging Schwede66 for completion. Sorry for dragging this out, but I just think it's a fine premise for a hook. Could it be reworded in a way that retains it? SWinxy (talk) 15:57, 23 April 2024 (UTC)- Since I got pinged here, I'll just note that when I raised my original query at WT:DYK, I only had a vague feeling that this might be a problem, but BlueMoonset's response clarified the issue in my mind and I agree with him that ALT1 is unsuitable. RoySmith (talk) 16:06, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Needs ALT2. Schwede66 16:38, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- The two concurring with you made their replies before I addressed your claim of it being a BLP issue. It's unfair to mark "consensus!" at the time right before I made my rebuttal to allow my point to be considered, and without responding directly to the rebuttal of the argument you made. I liked it and think it's interesting, yeah. el.ziade seemed to think so too in approving it, PrimalMustelid promoted it, and RoySmith said that
- SWinxy, it isn't just me: the consensus I'm seeing in the WT:DYK thread is that ALT1 is both negative and a BLP issue. "Accused" and "detained" both sound bad, and to add "once" would simply be read by most people that it happened in the past, not that it happened to him only once in his life: either way, he's painted as a drug smuggler on Wikipedia's front page. I strongly advise you to come up with an ALT2 that features a different set of facts, since ALT1—though you clearly like it—isn't going to be accepted at DYK. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:49, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- I strongly disagree with you that ALT1 is "negative" and a BLP issue. The wording is clear that he was accused, not convicted, of smuggling cocaine. It plainly does not violate BLP because it's sourced to the Associated Press, considered generally reliable at WP:RSP. Being accused of smuggling narcotics in an arm cast is unusual, quirky, absurd. ALT1 can be modified slightly to say that Malchow "was once detained" to lessen a perception that crime is Malchow's MO. But I find it odd to read it this way. SWinxy (talk) 18:06, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Striking ALT1 due to WP:BLP issues; original hook struck because "scheming them" is confusing given the context: what does scheming a contract even mean? Please propose a new hook. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:43, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
@SWinxy: Any hook ideas? Z1720 (talk) 13:30, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I've been a bit busy lately, so this has fallen by the wayside. I'm going to be freer after the Trump trial concludes. SWinxy (talk) 01:15, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- @SWinxy, RoySmith, and Elias Ziade: - How about:
- Alt2 ... that during his career, Hal Malchow consulted for every Democratic presidential nominee from 1988 through 2004?
- Alt3 ... that during his career, Hal Malchow consulted for every Democratic presidential nominee from 1988 through 2004, over 30 senatorial campaigns, and 20 gubernatorial campaigns?
- --evrik (talk) 16:35, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 14[edit]
Philomena Franz
- ... that after deportation to Auschwitz, internment in Ravensbrück, escape from a camp near Wittenberge and concealment by a farmer, Romani holocaust survivor Philomena Franz became a writer? Source: https://www.romarchive.eu/en/collection/p/philomena-franz/
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 94 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Lajmmoore (talk) 16:30, 14 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I would prefer more links and would suggest moving the bold link closer to the start of the sentence, but those are optional Lajmmoore. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:13, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ping Z1720 - this review had slipped my mind. I addressed the reference AirshipJungleman29 but I struggled to link in the camps, whilst still keep the hook under the word count. I have shifted the words round, so:
- ALT1... that Romani holocaust survivor Philomena Franz wrote about her deportation to Auschwitz, internment in Ravensbrück, escape from a camp near Wittenberge and concealment by a farmer?Source: https://www.romarchive.eu/en/collection/p/philomena-franz/
- Let me know what you think Lajmmoore (talk) 15:38, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Is this nomination approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 15:28, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 15[edit]
Estoppey D-series
- ... that the Army Air Corps were so unimpressed by the Estoppey D-8 that one member stated he would rather use nails and a wire? Source: McFarland, 141
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 196 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Maury Markowitz (talk) 23:28, 15 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article definitely long enough and presentable (although is almost entirely sourced to one source, so introducing other sources would probably be advisable.) The hook is verifiable by searching "nails and wire" on the Google Books page. Still needs the QPQ for official sign off, of course. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:01, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, as written, this would deserve {{more sources needed}}, so definitely needs more sources.--Launchballer 10:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Maury Markowitz: Please provide a QPQ, or this nomination may be closed as unsuccessful. Z1720 (talk) 14:00, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, as written, this would deserve {{more sources needed}}, so definitely needs more sources.--Launchballer 10:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: Sorry, no pings on this one and I forgot about it. QPQ 2024 Loblaw boycott Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:38, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Also, I added an image to the article which might be suitable if cropped. I don't see any others for this day with an image, is it worth adding? Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:39, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go as at the current juncture, though Launchballer's point that a more sources needed tag could very well get added is salient. I'd recommend doing a little more digging just to flesh this out if possible. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:48, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- As a DYK promoter, I would be inclined to think that at least one more source needs to be added, a concern that Launchballer expressed earlier. Also, the wiki article doesn't make it clear that the quote was stated by one Army Air Corps member. PrimalMustelid (talk) 01:23, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- @PrimalMustelid: added cite changed wording. Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:42, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- Better. Does the Description section need a source?--Launchballer 15:26, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think the first sentences need to either be merged with another paragraph or be cited. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:50, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Better. Does the Description section need a source?--Launchballer 15:26, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 16[edit]
Simone Murphy
- ... that prior to embarking on a music career during the pandemic, the DJ Sim0ne placed fifth on the eleventh series of Britain's Next Top Model in 2017? Source: https://theface.com/music/dua-lipa-illusion-review-playlist-ken-carson-simone
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Killing of David Ben Avraham
- Comment: I cleared out a bunch of BLP violations for this just over a week ago, and then 5x'd from that this afternoon. I have not managed to 5x this from the 'bad' version, and I don't think I'll be able to get to 5x (it's currently a little over 4x), so I humbly request IAR approval (and if not, this is at GA anyway, so I'll just bring it back later).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 219 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 15:53, 16 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: DYK tool was reading earlier versions of the article and not showing 5k. WP:5X clearly specifies the last version of the page before expansion, which occurred a week after the removal of the WP:BLP-violating material, so I think we're good on that front. The article cites ellesse-en for some of the hook, but you have The Face here (which also supports it). Personally, I feel like The Face may be more reliable than a commercial clothing store that featured her as a model. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:23, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- A few more referencing comments: Could not get a DOB on her Instagram post (WP:ABOUTSELF allows this, but I'm only seeing 'late 20s' at the source); the Danny Lomas podcast could benefit from {{cite podcast}} (the minutes, for example; one shouldn't need to review a 57 minute podcast); Bristol Post reference is underformatted; not sure about the reliability of Planet Woo. These aren't part of the DYK nom per se; please think of them as pre-GAR comments. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:31, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- Replaced the Ellesse-en source with The Face. If you scroll down on Instagram you should see her comment "gentle reminder my birthday is this saturday". The podcast should have a button saying "Transcript", which is what I used. Planet Woo is a media brand belonging to ITV, although I've just read on a press release that "the team behind VICE, i-D, Boiler Room and LADbible" founded it and WP:VICE has them in yellow. I'm not using it for anything controversial though, just an interview and attributed opinion.--Launchballer 08:43, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- Alright, looks up to snuff for DYK! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 11:56, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
United States' Telegraph
- ... that the chief editor of the United States' Telegraph gouged a rival reporter's eyes inside a Senate office? Source: Smith, Kenneth Laurence (1981). Duff Green and the United States' Telegraph, 1826-1837, p. 70 https://scholarworks.wm.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=3580&context=etd
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:32, 16 April 2024 (UTC).
- This should be interesting. I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:10, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Wonderful work! I enjoyed reading this (I just love old newspapers! ). Looks good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:51, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- The fact does sound interesting, but unfortunately, according to Fletcher M. Green in "Duff Green, Militant Journalist of the Old School," Duff Green "denied that he was armed or that he gouged Sparhawk's eyes," and it doesn't help that it was Sparhawk who made the original charge. There's not much of a way to prove that this for sure happened, so a different hook might need to be picked unless I can for sure confirm that this truly happened. PrimalMustelid (talk) 20:19, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Forgot to ping @Generalissima and @BeanieFan11. PrimalMustelid (talk) 20:21, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Why not just "that the chief editor of the United States' Telegraph allegedly gouged a rival reporter's eyes inside a Senate office?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:24, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- I'm a bit reluctant still, but I suppose it works better. PrimalMustelid (talk) 23:00, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Why not just "that the chief editor of the United States' Telegraph allegedly gouged a rival reporter's eyes inside a Senate office?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:24, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Forgot to ping @Generalissima and @BeanieFan11. PrimalMustelid (talk) 20:21, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 17[edit]
Obonga-Ottertooth Provincial Park
- ... that one of the canoe routes through Obonga-Ottertooth Provincial Park is difficult but rewarding for its "unusual and spectacular scenery"? Source: Ref #3 (Obonga-Ottertooth Provincial Park Management Statement)
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 36 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.P 1 9 9 ✉ 19:22, 18 April 2024 (UTC). General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
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Overall: --evrik (talk) 17:55, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Boot Monument
- ... that the Boot Monument (pictured) never mentions the name of its honoree because he was a traitor? Source: [10] [11] and Martin, James Kirby (1997). Benedict Arnold, Revolutionary Hero: An American Warrior Reconsidered. New York University Press. ISBN 0814755607
- ALT1: ... that the only monument to a traitor in the United States is a boot? Source: Tonsetic, Robert L. (2013-07-19). Special Operations in the American Revolution. Casemate. ISBN 978-1-61200-165-4.
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Relativity ⚡️ 00:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC).
- Comment: It has appeared on DYK before, but not in bold print. (See talk page for more details) Relativity ⚡️ 00:58, 17 April 2024 (UTC)-->
- I'll review this. Have read about this subject before. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: @Relativity: Nice work. ALT0 is good. I'm not sure ALT1 works however as the source only says that it is Arnold's only monument on American soil whereas the hook seems to apply to all American traitors. I also thought of another potential hook that might be decent: ... that a boot is the only monument in the United States to traitor Benedict Arnold because it "was the only part of Arnold not to later turn traitor"? That would require another reviewer, though. Let me know what you think; but ALT0 is good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 18[edit]
Gherardo Gambelli
- ... that Gherardo Gambelli, the incoming Archbishop of Florence, was called "the priest of the peripheries, from Africa to prison" by Avvenire? Source: Avvenire (in Italian)
- ALT1: ... that Gherardo Gambelli, the incoming Archbishop of Florence, served as a prison chaplain in Chad for over a decade? Source: Holy See Press Office; Il Messaggero
- Reviewed: Peter Verhægen
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 258 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Bloom6132 (talk) 21:24, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
- I'm listed as one of the creators. I'd suggest rephrasing to highlight the contrast between "archbishop" and "prison chaplain" and remove unessential "missionary": that Gherardo Gambelli, the incoming Archbishop of Florence, served as a prison chaplain in Chad for more than a decade? Rutsq (talk) 17:37, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- New enough; definitely long enough; presentable; no images; and QPQ fulfilled. Original hook is spicy, although I feel awkward just repeating someone else's quote about the subject; ALT1 is bland but also fine. Earwig can't find any copyvios and it rephrases all the cited sources. Two slight citation problems: the archdiocese of Florence press release link has decayed (I fixed this), and the Avvenire source does not support the claim that "his return to Italy in 2023 [was] at the request of his ordinary, Giuseppe Betori, Archbishop of Florence". I suspect a bad translation turned "rendere noto" into "made certain", when it really means "made public". A simple fix is to remove the "at the...Florence" clause, which is not necessary for the rest of the sentence (I did not fix this). Otherwise, the sources seem reliable: the only iffy one is the archdiocese of Florence press release, which may not be indepedent &emdash; but that is not the sole citation for the claim it supports. Bernanke's Crossbow (talk) 23:35, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Bernanke's Crossbow: done. Thanks a million for getting the archive URL for that press release! —Bloom6132 (talk) 02:27, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Then I change my review to . Bernanke's Crossbow (talk) 03:29, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Zapad 2009
- ... that Russian and Belarussian Zapad 2009 military exercise about repelling a NATO attack might have included simulation of nuclear strikes? Source: http://css.ethz.ch/en/services/digital-library/articles/article.html/109702 or https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/poland/6480227/Russia-simulates-nuclear-attack-on-Poland.html
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 507 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:11, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
PS. I forgot to mention - there are plenty of images available for this hook. See https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Zapad_2009 --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:31, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- You'll want to add one of these to the nom for consideration.--Launchballer 19:44, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I am not sure how to do it post-nom. But I'd suggest File:Zapad-2009 military exercises.jpg. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:01, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- By finding another nom that does it successfully and adapting it. I'll leave it to you to add a caption and will call for a reviewer.--Launchballer 15:47, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Caption: "Landing craft Mordowija 782 during Zapad 2009". --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 23:42, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- By finding another nom that does it successfully and adapting it. I'll leave it to you to add a caption and will call for a reviewer.--Launchballer 15:47, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I am not sure how to do it post-nom. But I'd suggest File:Zapad-2009 military exercises.jpg. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:01, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
New enough (5x expansion), long enough, well-written. Image is appropriately licensed as far as I can determine. QPQ is done. The hook is interesting and supported by an inline citation but not supported in its current format by what is written in the article. The article is a bit ambiguous on this point. On the one hand it asserts that "[...] it also simulated an amphibious landing in Poland, as well as - and most controversially - a nuclear attack against Poland (hitting Warsaw)." In my reading, this is a claim that the exercise did in fact contain such a simulation. Later, however, it is stated that "Other sources noted that the exercise involved nuclear-capable ballistic missiles (Iskander), but not necessarily a simulation of a nuclear attack on another country." I think this could be easily solved by re-phrasing the first sentence, but it should be resolved before I give the green light. Otherwise all criteria are fulfilled. Yakikaki (talk) 19:34, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Yakikaki: Can I trouble you to suggest an alt hook with a revised wording that I can then review and adopt? I am not sure what exact minor wording change you suggest, but I am pretty sure I'd be fine with it and I'd propose it myself if I wasn't too tired to figure it out myself now. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:52, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Alt 1a ... that Russian and Belarussian Zapad 2009 military exercise about repelling a NATO attack might have included simulated nuclear strikes on another country?
- @Piotrus and Yakikaki: thoughts? --evrik (talk) 17:08, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- There's nothing wrong with the original hook, and Alt 1a doesn't solve the problem. The issue, which I think is very easily fixed, is that the article isn't clear on the point whether it might have included a simulated nuclear strikes on another country, or whether it in fact did. That needs to be clarified. I can then greenlight it. Yakikaki (talk) 18:03, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yakikaki, The article cites the sources; some of which say this happened and some which are more cautious. Not sure how to word it better than what we already have, both in the hook and in the article. If you think you have a better wording, be bold. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:16, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
I fixed it for you. You'll need another reviewer to do the review again, though. Yakikaki (talk) 14:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. Maybe User:Evrik would like to do this? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:53, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- I will approve the original hook. I can't approve my hook, but will leave that for the promoter. 15:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Matthew Charles Johnson
- ... that Matthew Charles Johnson killed Victoria's most high-profile prisoner, Carl Williams, while in the state's highest security prison unit? Source: paras 3, 249 - [12] and para 1 - [13]
- ALT1: ... that during the "trial from hell" Matthew Charles Johnson and his co-accused hurled abuse at the judge and even threw human excrement at a member of the jury? Source: https://www.theage.com.au/national/inside-the-trial-from-hell-20021214-gduxig.html
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.GMH Melbourne (talk) 05:04, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
- You need to remedy that {{no lead}} tag before this can go anywhere.--Launchballer 05:12, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Launchballer: I completely forgot about that, I'll get on to it now. GMH Melbourne (talk) 05:19, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Done GMH Melbourne (talk) 06:41, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Matthew Charles Johnson's middle name can be removed from the hooks if need be. GMH Melbourne (talk) 05:19, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
Article is new and long enough. Sourcing looks good though Earwig found a handful of word-for-word similarities with "theage.com.au" source. A minor issue with each of the proposed hooks: ALT0 says that Williams was Victoria's most high-profile prisoner - the body of the article supports that but the sources seem to claim he was just a high-profile prisoner. ALT1 says they threw feces at a member of the jury but the article and sources only say "excrement". Both hooks are interesting however. QPQ is not required so just need hooks fixed and that should be all. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 15:31, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- @PCN02WPS: Thank you for taking the time to review! I have reworded the article in most cases where Earwig's Copyvio Detector identified an issue but I think a lot of it falls under WP:LIMITED, or are quotes. Let me know if this needs to be addressed further. In paragraph 249 of that source, it mentions Williams as the "highest profile prisoner in Victoria". I have changed the wording of ALT1 from 'feces' to 'excrement' — GMH Melbourne (talk) 03:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Boyz Unlimited
- ... that Richard Osman, who wrote "the biggest thing in fiction since Harry Potter", lost confidence in his writing ability after his experience with Boyz Unlimited? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/culture/2023/sep/09/richard-osman-i-would-have-been-terrible-in-mi6-im-too-tall-spill-secrets-and-cant-lie for quote, https://www.gq-magazine.co.uk/culture/article/richard-osman-interview for rest
- ALT1: ... that Boyz Unlimited included a cover of Dr. Hook's "A Little Bit More" on the grounds that it was "too tasteless", only for 911's version to top the UK singles chart between recording and broadcast? Source: https://www.independent.co.uk/arts-entertainment/boys-will-be-boybands-1076195.html
- ALT2: ... that prior to playing a boyband member in the 1999 series Boyz Unlimited, Billy Worth had been in an actual boyband launched by a UK breakfast television franchisee? Source: per ALT1
- ALT3: ... that after a bad experience on Boyz Unlimited, David Walliams and Matt Lucas refused to work with Hat Trick Productions for several years? Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=d6m7OCxJWl0C&newbks=0&printsec=frontcover&pg=PR142&dq=boyz+unlimited+richard+osman+david+walliams+samira&hl=en
- ALT4: ... that Boyz Unlimited was written by Richard Osman and/or the double act of David Walliams and Matt Lucas? Source: per ALT3
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/On the German Republic
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 220 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 15:58, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
- 5x expanded by nom. Article is adequately sourced, no issues arose upon checking. The largest similarity result from Earwig is just due to a quoted passage from a critic. Hooks are interesting, I personally like the first hook and ALT2 the most, but all are good and work. QPQ OK. Nicely done! Good to go. B3251 (talk) 15:25, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
Antimonumento 5J
- ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during a protest in response to Giovanni López's arrest four years ago today and his subsequent death? Source: Milenio[14]: "se realizó un acto de memoria pacífica donde también se develó un antimonumento con el objetivo de no olvidar los actos de opresión que ejercieron las autoridades de seguridad pública en contra de ciudadanos manifestantes durante el 4, 5 y 6 de junio del 2020, protestas que se realizaron en torno al asesinato de Giovanni López a manos de policías municipales de Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos." (Translation: "an act of peaceful remembrance was held where an anti-monument was also unveiled with the objective of not forgetting the acts of oppression exercised by public security authorities against protesting citizens during 4, 5 and 6 June 2020, protests that took place around the murder of Giovanni López at the hands of municipal police officers of Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos.")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Skyrocket Galaxy
- Comment: The nomination is specific for May 4.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 45 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.(CC) Tbhotch™ 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
- Length, date, qpq ok, no close paraphrase found. Image on Commons. Not sure we'd time the DYK to match what the death anniversary, though. --Soman (talk) 09:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during protests that occurred four years ago in response to the death of Giovanni López?
Articles created/expanded on April 19[edit]
Bed of nails defense
- ... that in order to protect the Minuteman missile silos from attack, Richard Garwin proposed using a bed of nails? Source: Garwin
- Reviewed: Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly
- Comment: quite possibly the strangest yet also illuminating articles on cold war politics
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 197 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Maury Markowitz (talk) 23:54, 19 April 2024 (UTC).
- Very fascinating article; I had never heard of such a thing. Article is good and hook is interesting. I don't have access to the source so will assume good faith. Just waiting on a QPQ. —Panamitsu (talk) 08:02, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- I've added a link to JSTOR for the Garvin (1976) magazine article, which I hope will help. I note that almost all of the references are those of Richard Garwin, published over the span of about a decade, and that the proposal was never implemented. Nevertheless, and interesting article with an engaging hook that's also accurate! Klbrain (talk) 14:27, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Klbrain: QPQ Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:48, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
155 Mercer Street
- ... that firefighters were alerted to a fire in their fire station at 155 Mercer Street in Manhattan by a ring-tailed monkey named Jenny throwing billiard balls down a flight of stairs? Source: "One time she woke the sleeping company to a fire in its own building by throwing billiard balls down a flight of stairs." [15]
- Reviewed: TBD
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 19 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Found5dollar (talk) 19:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC).
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- Other problems: - Needs a copyedit, for example: lots of its/it's confusion, "The Dia Art Foundation purchased the stripped down sturcture", "They also installing Dan Flavin artworks in 1982" in the lead.
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Overall: hinnk (talk) 22:16, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- @hinnk Thank you for the review. I have done a copyedit to fix the items you note and a few additional things i caught. I have completed a QPQ review at Template:Did you know nominations/Butterfly Theater. -- Found5dollar (talk) 19:17, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Hinnk:realizing I didn't ping correctly with my response. Try again.--Found5dollar (talk) 13:44, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Horvat ’Eqed
- ... that the fortifications of Horvat ’Eqed may have been constructed by the Seleucid general Bacchides as part of his efforts to suppress the Maccabean Revolt? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
- ALT1: ... that Horvat ’Eqed, a fortified ruin nestled in the Judaean Mountains, may have served as a major stronghold during the Bar Kokhba revolt? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
- ALT2: ... that excavations at Horvat ’Eqed uncovered coinage and hiding complexes dating from the Bar Kokhba revolt, as well as arrowheads, armor scales, slingshots, and ballistae? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Mariamnei (talk) 20:17, 19 April 2024 (UTC).
- Leaning towards ALT2 for the Main Page. Wishing you luck (and peace) soon. --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 06:40, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
Chuck Eisenmann
- ... that Chuck Eisenmann went from professionally pitching in baseball to owning and training the dogs that starred on the Canadian television series The Littlest Hobo? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/article/calgary-herald/145466528/
- ALT1: ... that Minor League Baseball (MiLB) pitcher Chuck Eisenmann owned and trained London, the dog that starred on the The Littlest Hobo film as well as its subsequent television series? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/article/kearney-hub/145453058/ (for the film) and https://www.newspapers.com/article/the-ottawa-citizen/145462177/ (for the television series)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Boyz Unlimited
- Comment: I'm not totally confident on the wording of my hooks, so feel free to suggest any alternatives.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.B3251 (talk) 15:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article was nominated within three days of creation, so is new enough. It's more than long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds nothing outside of dates and names of institutions. Both hooks are good, interesting, and cited in-line. I think the original hook is worded best, personally. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 23:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 20[edit]
Spider (musician)
- ... that the Irish musician Spider began making alternative music on the grounds that not enough Black women were doing so? Source: https://readdork.com/features/spider-interview-jul23/
- ALT1: ... that Spider travelled from Tallaght in Ireland to London aged eighteen? Source: https://www.thelineofbestfit.com/new-music/discovery/spider-u-get-high-i-get-nothing
- ALT2: ... that the music video treatment for Spider's "America's Next Top Model" was nineteen pages long? Source: https://www.nme.com/features/music-interviews/spider-interview-hell-or-high-water-ep-radar-3431579
- ALT3: ... that Spider went viral on TikTok for a track partly inspired by an androgynous Nigerian deity? Source: https://theface.com/music/new-rising-musicians-2022-ones-to-watch-list
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Classy 101
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 222 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 19:40, 20 April 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting bio on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. I like the original hook and approve that one. It clearly says that Spider is a Black woman musician, which I miss in all ALTS, and actually also in the lead of the article; I think that her Nigerian background should be mentioned there. My English is not good enough to tell a difference between "on the grounds" and a simple "because", but I know that the former phrase appears in the article in two sentences in a row, which I believe should be avoided. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:51, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- Both done.--Launchballer 17:19, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Launchballer, it seems to me that the article is incorrect in attributing her resumption of production during COVID to feeling there were not enough Black women in the industry; the source says that she had this feeling in school, before moving to London. This goes for other sources like this one as well, where her "[disappointment at] the seeming lack of diversity" is described as being around 2016.
Gerda Arendt, considering the problem with ALT0, are any of the other hooks approved?~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:15, 7 May 2024 (UTC)- Actually, scratch some of that, the hook doesn't have a problem because it doesn't state a date and can probably rely on the lengthy quote for WP:DYKCITE (although that seems fairly lengthy from a copyright perspective), so no need for the alt hooks to be considered. Sorry for the ping Gerda. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:18, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- I've taken a bit out of the quote, though I'm now wondering if I've taken out necessary context. I'm a bit confused by your two-part post - what else do I need to do?--Launchballer 06:15, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies for the confusion Launchballer; I felt that in the "Career" section, "feeling that that there were not enough Black women making alternative music is incorrectly placed—the cited sources are clear that she had this thought long before COVID. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:19, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- I've taken a bit out of the quote, though I'm now wondering if I've taken out necessary context. I'm a bit confused by your two-part post - what else do I need to do?--Launchballer 06:15, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, scratch some of that, the hook doesn't have a problem because it doesn't state a date and can probably rely on the lengthy quote for WP:DYKCITE (although that seems fairly lengthy from a copyright perspective), so no need for the alt hooks to be considered. Sorry for the ping Gerda. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:18, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Both done.--Launchballer 17:19, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly
... that the lo-fi music of Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly and its prequel perfectly complimented the entire experience? Source: https://www.digitallydownloaded.net/2023/04/review-coffee-talk-episode-2-hibiscus-butterfly-pc.htmlALT1: ... that both Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly and Episode 1 has some of the best lo-fi music out of all the video games out there? Source: https://www.digitallydownloaded.net/2023/04/review-coffee-talk-episode-2-hibiscus-butterfly-pc.html- Reviewed:
- Comment: I am leaning towards the first hook since that is the best. At least the second give me options
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.JuniperChill (talk) 17:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC).
- Not a review, and I review oldest first so would not get to this any time soon (but would not object to any other reviewer doing so in the interim); both hooks violate WP:NPOV and have been struck. I've also removed one sentence that also violated WP:NPOV, so this is now below 1500 characters.--Launchballer 20:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Given that it is midnight for me (in the UK), I will expand this article and think of a compliant hook ~10 hours from now after my sleep. I may even have to think about a hook that doesn't have something to do with the lo-fi music. JuniperChill (talk) 22:59, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done the expansion to at least 1500 characters (can also be 1.5kb), now I am thinking of the following hooks.
- ALT2: that Mohammad Fahmi, the main creator of Coffee Talk died in March 2022, after the sequel was announced?
- ALT3: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after Mohammad Fahmi, the main creator of Coffee Talk, died in March 2022?
For both, the sources came from https://www.eurogamer.net/coffee-talk-creator-fahmi-has-passed-away
- No, it can't "also be 1.5kb" - WP:DYKRULES specifies "1500 characters". ALT3 is the better hook, although I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to truncate it at "died". Full review needed.--Launchballer 10:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
Just long enough, well refed, everything else GTG. Strongly suggest cutting ALT3 for reading clarity:
- ALT3a: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after its creator Mohammad Fahmi died in March 2022? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maury Markowitz (talk • contribs) 15:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- While that is clearer, it makes it look like Fahmi created only Episode 2, so I am making a slight adjustment of ALT3a below, removing the names so that it is clear that it is talking about the main creator of Coffee Talk (video game) and not the second.
- ALT3b: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after its main creator of Coffee Talk died in March 2022?
- I think removing the names will be clearer. JuniperChill (talk) 17:43, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- While that is clearer, it makes it look like Fahmi created only Episode 2, so I am making a slight adjustment of ALT3a below, removing the names so that it is clear that it is talking about the main creator of Coffee Talk (video game) and not the second.
- ALT3a: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after its creator Mohammad Fahmi died in March 2022? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maury Markowitz (talk • contribs) 15:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
September 2023 New York floods
- ... that all services on the New York City Subway were affected because of floods across the city in September 2023? Source: The New York Times
- ALT1: ...
that floods across New York City in September 2023 caused a female sea lion to briefly escape from the Central Park Zoo? Source: CNN - ALT2: ... that the basement of the Prospect Park Zoo was inundated with 25 ft (300 in) of water, thanks to floods across the New York City area in September 2023? Source: Wildlife Conservation Society
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Bonn–Oberkassel dog
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QPQ coming soon!
- ALT1: ...
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 02:29, 20 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Well done on the GA review @Tails Wx :) preference for ALT1. Nothing else of note, really. Just ping me if the QPQ is done. PSA 🏕️ (talk) 07:21, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, PSA, I've provided the QPQ above! :) ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 13:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, @Tails Wx. Good to go PSA 🏕️ (talk) 02:01, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- I quite enjoyed ALT1 but it's not really correct @Tails Wx and PSA: the source includes the quote "the sea lion remained inside the zoo, never breaching the zoo’s secondary perimeter" and is clear that she only managed to escape her enclosure. I've thus struck the hook; it will need rephrasing as ALT1a if it is desired that it runs. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:30, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29, how about this:
- ALT1a: ...that floods across New York City in September 2023 breached a female sea lion's enclosure at the Central Park Zoo, which led her to briefly escape it?
- I quite enjoyed ALT1 but it's not really correct @Tails Wx and PSA: the source includes the quote "the sea lion remained inside the zoo, never breaching the zoo’s secondary perimeter" and is clear that she only managed to escape her enclosure. I've thus struck the hook; it will need rephrasing as ALT1a if it is desired that it runs. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:30, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, @Tails Wx. Good to go PSA 🏕️ (talk) 02:01, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
Rhynchocyon
- ... that a new subspecies of giant sengi was recently discovered? Source: "Despite the pelage differences, initial DNA comparisons found it nearly identical to R. chrysopygus. A later DNA comparison supported a designation of a new subspecies, Rhynchocyon chrysopygus mandelai as it diverges in pelage and is allopatric to R. chrysopygus (Agwanda et al. 2021)."
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 02:53, 20 April 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ: Kiso 5639 and moved to prep. Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 03:27, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Date, size, expansion, hook, refs, QPQ, copyvio spotcheck, all GTG. Minor disclaimer: the prose script I use does not count tables and bulleted lists, and without them I see only ~2.5-3x expansion. But there is a new large table (with some advanced features) and a new list, so I am AGFing the 5x claim. PS. I added a single citation needed request to one sentence - I ask the nom to comment here on whether it has been addressed. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:15, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Reference added! And yes, it was not massively expanded, however I am working on more sections in the conservation section today. Thank you for the comments. Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 22:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Not happy with 'recently'; hooks must not be likely to change.--Launchballer 17:41, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Azcolvin429: Another issue with recently is that it's relative to the field but if that's unclear, it could give folks a misleading impression. 2008/7 is recent for the discovery of species, but not recent in other ways. Back in 2007, you could pull your Blackberry out of your ombré jeans and text your friends to meet you at Blockbuster Video so you all could rent a DVD to play on your PS2. Some people could read the hook as meaning that it was discovered earlier this year. I thought some of the reproduction information cited to Rathbun was interesting, including that they're monogamous but spend little time together and the quick development of the offspring, "mall versions of adults and are able to run swiftly within an hour of birth". Good luck, whichever way you go, Rjjiii (talk) 06:24, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Not happy with 'recently'; hooks must not be likely to change.--Launchballer 17:41, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- Reference added! And yes, it was not massively expanded, however I am working on more sections in the conservation section today. Thank you for the comments. Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 22:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 21[edit]
Andrena astragali, Toxicoscordion venenosum
- ... that the nectar and pollen of meadow death camas (pictured) and its relatives are so toxic that no bee except the death camas miner bee (pictured) can eat them? Source: Cane, James H. (October 2018). "Co-dependency between a specialist Andrena bee and its death camas host, Toxicoscordion paniculatum". Arthropod-Plant Interactions. 12 (5): 657–662. doi:10.1007/s11829-018-9626-9 Quote: "In this study, T. paniculatum, T. venenosum and co-flowering forbs were sampled for bees at 15 sites along a 900-km-long east–west transect across the northern Great Basin plus an altitudinal gradient in northern Utah’s Bear River Range. Only A. astragali bees were regularly seen visiting flowering panicles of these Toxicoscordion."Cane, James H; Gardner, Dale R; Weber, Melissa (2 December 2020). "Neurotoxic alkaloid in pollen and nectar excludes generalist bees from foraging at death-camas, Toxicoscordion paniculatum (Melanthiaceae)". Biological Journal of the Linnean Society. 131 (4): 927–935. doi:10.1093/biolinnean/blaa159. Quote: "These two death-camas species are the sole floral hosts of the solitary andrenid bee Andrena astragali Ckll., which in turn was the only bee species (or any other insect) found regularly visiting these flowers across much of the plant’s geographic ranges (Cane, 2018)."
- ALT1: ... that death camas miner bees (pictured) mainly consume toxic nectar and pollen from meadow death camas (pictured) and its close relatives? Source: Same as above.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Vanna Venturi House
- Comment: Open to wording changes. My first nomination of two articles at the same time.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.🌿MtBotany (talk) 19:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC).
- Since this is a two-article nomination, you need a second QPQ. The hook, article conditions, and eligibility check out, and I don't see any evidence of copyvio. You do need to bold the linked terms, however. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 21:19, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the information @Generalissima:. Sorry I missed that if two articles are nominated at once it needs two QPQ. Thanks for fixing my formatting errors. I have another review in progress for Cora Babbitt Johnson. I'll try to review another nomination in case it takes longer than I anticipate. 🌿MtBotany (talk) 03:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- @MtBotany: You don't need to wait for the previous review to completely finish before using it as a QPQ, as long as you have done your due diligence in the initial check for the article. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:11, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Another thing for me to learn! Educational evening. Thanks for your attention. I should still do one so I have an extra in my back pocket for next time. I'm looking at improving other plant articles for DYK in time for their blooming seasons. The meadow death camas in my garden are up and getting energy, they will be blooming in Colorado in about a week and I'm seeing current year observations on iNaturalist 🌿MtBotany (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- @MtBotany: You don't need to wait for the previous review to completely finish before using it as a QPQ, as long as you have done your due diligence in the initial check for the article. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:11, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the information @Generalissima:. Sorry I missed that if two articles are nominated at once it needs two QPQ. Thanks for fixing my formatting errors. I have another review in progress for Cora Babbitt Johnson. I'll try to review another nomination in case it takes longer than I anticipate. 🌿MtBotany (talk) 03:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: Can this be approved? If not, what needs to happen to get it approved? Z1720 (talk) 14:07, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Oh, yes. This can be approved now. My bad for not stating so. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:13, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: If this is approved, can you add the green tick under this comment, so the DYK bot can moved this to the approved list? Z1720 (talk) 15:43, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Oops. Added. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Dedie Rachim
- ... that Indonesian politician Dedie Rachim was the first Corruption Eradication Commission staff to resign to take part in an election? Source: [16]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Missoula Children's Theatre
- Comment: -
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 217 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Juxlos (talk) 08:40, 21 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article new enough and long enough. Passes earwig, no close paraphrasing was found, and the hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified (AGF on Indonesian source). QPQ done. Image appropriately licensed. GTG. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:11, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Ellen Oliver (suffragette)
- ... that suffragette Ellen Oliver (pictured) recognised that Mabel Barltrop was the spiritual child of Joanna Southcott? Source: "on Valentine's Day 1919 Ellen Oliver declared Barltrop to be 'Shiloh'" - Shiloh was the name given to Southcott's spiritual children https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=VhOMDwAAQBAJ&newbks=0&printsec=frontcover&pg=PA168&dq=ellen+oliver+bedford&hl=en&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=ellen%20oliver%20bedford&f=false
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Nxdia
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 96 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Lajmmoore (talk) 16:44, 21 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Great work on this article! Earwig highlighted a few words, but they just appear to be common words and phrases. Good to go! Kentuckian |💬 15:11, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- I worry about this hook's WP:DYKINTerestingness, as it is entirely dependent on knowing its names (I only know of Joanna Southcott because I'm distantly related to her). What else have you got?--Launchballer 08:38, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Nxdia
- ... that the Egyptian-Sudanese singer Nxdia took the "queer anthem" "She Likes a Boy" into the UK Singles Sales Chart? Source: https://diymag.com/feature/the-neu-bulletin-c-turtle-fraulein-sailor-honeymoon
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 223 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 14:38, 21 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough and long enough, it is neutral and well sourced. Earwig picks up a bit of a quote, but otherwise no close phrasing, so all OK. QPQ is done. Hook is interesting, but I couldn't see a reference to the Singles Chart in the source - could you clariy the chart part of the hook? Thanks Lajmmoore (talk) 16:35, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- My mistake, I kept rewording the hook. Try [17].--Launchballer 18:15, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Launchballer - hook is good (& citation archived here), all OK Lajmmoore (talk) 09:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer and Lajmmoore: am I missing something, or is the hook just not that interesting? Is there nothing better than "... that a singer sung a song which appeared (fairly low) on a songs chart?" ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:03, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- The interesting bit is "queer anthem", given that neither Egypt or Sudan are known for positive attitudes to homosexuality.--Launchballer 06:09, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- I suppose. Why is she called English in the lead then? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Because I assumed that she was until I wrote the article, and forgot to take that bit out. I think there's some MOS dictum that says nationality should be left out of the first sentence altogether, so that's what I've done.--Launchballer 01:49, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- My mistake, I just read MOS:BIOFIRSTSENTENCE and it says to include it. It now says "Egyptian alt-pop musician of Sudanese descent".--Launchballer 09:20, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Because I assumed that she was until I wrote the article, and forgot to take that bit out. I think there's some MOS dictum that says nationality should be left out of the first sentence altogether, so that's what I've done.--Launchballer 01:49, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- I suppose. Why is she called English in the lead then? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- The interesting bit is "queer anthem", given that neither Egypt or Sudan are known for positive attitudes to homosexuality.--Launchballer 06:09, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer and Lajmmoore: am I missing something, or is the hook just not that interesting? Is there nothing better than "... that a singer sung a song which appeared (fairly low) on a songs chart?" ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:03, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Launchballer - hook is good (& citation archived here), all OK Lajmmoore (talk) 09:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
John Silva Meehan
- ... that John Silva Meehan, a critic of the political patronage system, was hired as Librarian of Congress through "purely an act of political patronage"? Source: Meehan's opposition to patronage: Smith, Kenneth Laurence (1981). Duff Green and the United States' Telegraph, 1826-1837 pp. 82–83. Quote on his appointment: Nappo, Christian A. (2016). The Librarians of Congress, pp. 31–32.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 17:49, 21 April 2024 (UTC).
- I will gladly review this! WatkynBassett (talk) 17:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- The article was expanded and nominated today (21 April 2024).
- The article has been expanded more than fivefold (more like 20x).
- The article is well sourced. I did one spot check and the reference checked out.
- The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone.
- Earwig did not pick up anything.
- QPQ provided.
- The hook has the right length and is interesting. The part of the hook on him being hired and the quote itself is well sourced. However, I struggle a bit with the part on him being "a critic of the spoils system". I think you rely here on Smith 1981 (pp. 82–83). I see that he criticized particulars of the spoils system there. But whether this elevates him to an outright critic of the system I am unsure. Maybe a weaker statement like "[...] who had criticized the political patronage system earlier [...]" would be more reflective of the source? What do you think?
- Thank you for your great work Generalissima! I will approve this nomination if this one quibble is addressed. WatkynBassett (talk) 18:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- @WatkynBassett: Fair point! Would something along the lines of "... that after criticizing the political patronage system, John Silva Meehan was hired as Librarian of Congress through "purely an act of political patronage"?" work? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:05, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima That sounds very well! I approve this hook as hook ALT1:
- ALT1: "... that after criticizing the political patronage system, John Silva Meehan was hired as Librarian of Congress through "purely an act of political patronage"?" . WatkynBassett (talk) 19:12, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 22[edit]
Ruach Planitia
- ... that that a large basin on Neptune's moon Triton may once have filled with liquid water cryolava, similar to how liquid silicates fill lava lakes on Earth? Source: Gregg, Tracy K. P. and collaborators "Planetary Volcanism across the Solar System" chapter 5 - Cryovolcanism (https://www.sciencedirect.com/book/9780128139875/planetary-volcanism-across-the-solar-system) Source says: Some features [on Triton] resemble volcanic calderas on Earth that are filled with fluid lava. Fig. 23E shows one such example, Ruach Planitia ... The plains contain clusters of pits, which may be volcanic vents from which the smooth material erupted, before ponding and filling the area enclosed by the scarps. (p. 219)
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- Comment: Unsure about the wording of "liquid silicates", "liquid rock" or an alternative may be more appropriate. Leaving up to the reviewer to decide.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.ArkHyena (talk) 02:03, 25 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article was created three days before nomination. Article meets adequate length & general guideline requirements, although the first sentence in Ruach Planitia#Discovery and naming doesn't seem to have a proper citation. Could that be fixed? WP:AGF on sources I cannot access, otherwise it looks good. No copyvio found w/ Earwig. Hook is interesting enough, AGF again as I cannot see the figure for a book I do not have access to. I recommend wikilinking silicate. No QPQ required. Good job on the article! Just let me know if you could get that citation issue sorted with. Thanks, B3251 (talk) 16:17, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Added a reference to the NASA site for Voyager 2[18] as per these sections of text: Voyager photographed two-thirds of Neptune’s largest moon Triton ... Spectacular images of its southern hemisphere showed a strange, pitted cantaloupe-type terrain. and Voyager 2 was the first human-made object to fly by Neptune.. A similar reference has been added to its sister article, Tuonela Planitia. ArkHyena (talk) 07:53, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
Live into 85
- ... that over the course of 1984's BBC New Year's Eve special Live into 85, John Grieve forgot his lines, Chic Murray spent his set berating the floor manager, and Maggie Moone was groped mid-performance? Source: https://www.comedy.co.uk/features/comedy_chronicles/hogmanay-tv-broadcasts/
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 224 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 12:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC).
- What a trainwreck!! This article had me in stitches. It also is new enough, long enough, and contains the hook fact in the article with no textual issues. A hearty thank you for the laughter, Launchballer. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 08:50, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 23[edit]
Inman Jackson
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.. that Inman Jackson played basketball "as though he were born with a basketball in each hand"?
- Source: The Minneapolis Journal
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Josef Peskoller
- Comment: Realized I'm one day late; requesting an extension per Wikipedia:Did you know/Guidelines.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 165 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:01, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Needs QPQ. I wonder also if hook can do without the "basketball" before the quote i.e. "that Inman Jackson played basketball'as though..." —Bagumba (talk) 12:34, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Bagumba: QPQ done. So: ALT1: ... that Inman Jackson played "as though he were born with a basketball in each hand"? BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:13, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1 approved.—Bagumba (talk) 07:03, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Joel Breman
- ... that Joel Breman was part of the team which combatted the 1976 Zaire Ebola virus outbreak?
- Source: "Dr. Joel Breman, a specialist in infectious diseases who was a member of the original team that helped combat the Ebola virus in 1976, died on April 6 at his home in Chevy Chase, Md. He was 87."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Elizabeth Seifert
- Comment: Alternate hooks welcome! I will likely make one or two over the next day or two.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 131 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Thriley (talk) 16:44, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
- Newly created article of an ITN Recent Death article, which are still DYK eligible. It's long enough, neutral and well sourced. No sign of close paraphrasing. The hook fact is interesting. But, why doesn't the article link to 1976 Zaire Ebola virus outbreak? QPQ is done. – Muboshgu (talk) 04:19, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Samir Aït Saïd
- ... that French gymnast Samir Aït Saïd (pictured) returned to competition one year after breaking his left tibia and fibula at the 2016 Summer Olympics? Source: International Gymnastics Federation
- ALT1: ... that gymnast Samir Aït Saïd (pictured) performed a backflip as the French team walked in at the 2020 Summer Olympics opening ceremony? Source: International Olympic Committee
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Croxton
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QPQ coming soon.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 28 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Riley1012 (talk) 21:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article checks out for 5x expansion, length, neutrality and sourcing. Copyvio completely checks out. Hooks are interesting and fully sourced, and present within the article. QPQ has been completed. Happy to pass this one. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 21:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Oophaga solanensis
- ... that the end of armed conflict in Colombia has increased the threats faced by the frog Oophaga solanensis? Source: IUCN SSC Amphibian Specialist Group (2019). "Oophaga solanensis". IUCN Red List of Threatened Species. 2019: e.T144232525A144232914. doi:10.2305/IUCN.UK.2019-2.RLTS.T144232525A144232914.en.
- ALT1: ... that Oophaga solanensis frogs can be bought for $3 in Colombia and sold for up to $1,000 overseas? Source: IUCN SSC Amphibian Specialist Group (2019). "Oophaga solanensis". IUCN Red List of Threatened Species. 2019: e.T144232525A144232914. doi:10.2305/IUCN.UK.2019-2.RLTS.T144232525A144232914.en.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Protecting Americans from Foreign Adversary Controlled Applications Act
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 31 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.AryKun (talk) 21:51, 25 April 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. SupremeLordBagel (talk to me) 04:24, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- @AryKun: Article is new enough (per WP:DYK5X) and long enough. The article is sourced adequately and reliably, neutral, and there isn't any plagiarism. I prefer ALT1, as it's a little more interesting and the wording in ALT0 is a little unclear. I've made an alternative hook for ALT1 specifying that Colombia is their native country (just for complete clarity).
- ALT1a: ... that Oophaga solanensis frogs can be bought for $3 in their native Colombia and sold for up to $1,000 overseas?
- Looks ready. This is my first DYK review, so I'd love a second opinion. Thanks, SupremeLordBagel (talk to me) 05:04, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Here's your second opinion. Long enough, new enough. No maintenance templates found, no neutrality issues found, Earwig is quiet. QPQ done. Both hooks would require an end-of-sentence citation. (Side note: Please consider reviewing oldest first per WP:DYKRI.)--Launchballer 22:10, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
Amie Parnes
- ... that Amie Parnes allegedly first heard about her employer, The Messenger, ceasing operations from a New York Times article? Source: "I’m a loyal person by nature and I talked to Jimmy up until the minute we found out about the shutdown from a piece in The New York Times." Vanity Fair
- ALT1: ... that a 2013 photo of Joe Biden embracing political journalist Amie Parnes generated controversy? Source: "In a light-hearted photograph taken with The Hill’s White House correspondent Amie Parnes, Vice President Joe Biden can be seen with his hands high on the reporter’s waist — and Parnes with her hands firmly on top of Biden’s. The photo was lifted off Parnes' Facebook page, and some outlets questioned whether Parnes was trying to block Biden’s hands from moving any further." TODAY
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- Comment: Two potential hooks. I thought both were interesting but I understand that the second might violate WP:DYKHOOKBLP. Haven't done one of these in a while so forgive me if I need to adjust some of the formatting.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Pac-Man PHD (talk) 07:25, 23 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article new and long enough notwithstanding the seven month draft period (happens). QPQ not needed as this is nominator's first DYK - welcome, by the way. Original hook is more interesting, cited inline and confirmed in cited source(s), and agree about the BLP issues with ALT1. Copyvio check only flagged direct quotes, so no issues. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 03:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
2010 Oklahoma State Question 755
- ... that Oklahoma wasn't allowed to ban Sharia law? Source: HuffPost
- ALT1: ... that a measure to ban Sharia law in Oklahoma was inspired by an overturned legal case in New Jersey? Source: CBS News
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Le Touquet
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Elli (talk | contribs) 04:18, 23 April 2024 (UTC).
- I personally think the first hook is great. It certainly got my attention. The article itself is long, was moved to the mainspace just today, is based on reliable sources, and looks fully complete. My only potential concern is that the hook doesn't explicitly state that it was struck down in court, but I think that can probably be inferred as is. Pac-Man PHD (talk) 08:27, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Though Earwig found likely copyvio, it's basing that off of a direct quote from the contents of the proposal, an open and free document that is properly attributed to, so it shouldn't be a violation. I think this is all in order. Still, felt it should be mentioned in case the author wants to paraphrase the contents of the proposal or if an administrator takes issue with it. Pac-Man PHD (talk) 08:46, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 24[edit]
Drake–Kendrick Lamar feud
- ... that the Drake–Kendrick Lamar feud dates back to the 2013 song "Control"?
ALT1: ... that the Drake–Kendrick Lamar feud dates back to 2013? Source: same sources as alt0ALT2a: ... that the "beef" between Kendrick Lamar and Drake dates back to 2013? Source: same sources as alt0- ALT2b: ... that the "beef" between Kendrick Lamar and Drake dates back to the 2013 song "Control"? Source: same sources as alt0
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Robyn Gigl
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Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 12:49, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
- Of those, I prefer ALT2b. Cooljeanius (talk) (contribs) 21:35, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- I too prefer ALT2b; it connects their current beef to a specific song from 2013 - nearly a decade ago. Yoshiman6464 ♫🥚 04:06, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: I've been monitoring this article for a few days now. It is actively being edited. The photos were used at the time of nomination, but have been swapped. Right now, at this moment, the nomination is good to go. --evrik (talk) 16:20, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
The Skeptical Environmentalist
- ... that Mark Lynas once pied author Bjørn Lomborg because he disagreed with the views he had set out in The Skeptical Environmentalist?
- ALT1: ... that sales of The Skeptical Environmentalist quadrupled after a series of negative reviews in Scientific American were published? Source: https://www.nature.com/articles/423216a
- ALT2: ... that E. O. Wilson said he regretted "the time wasted by scientists correcting the misinformation created" by The Skeptical Environmentalist? Source: https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/19438150903533730
- ALT3: ... that The Skeptical Environmentalist was found to be scientifically dishonest by a Danish government agency? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2003/01/08/world/environment-and-science-danes-rebuke-a-skeptic.html
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ivančena
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Arcahaeoindris (talk) 22:41, 26 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: A newly promoted GA which received an appropriate review during the GAN. Overall, everything looks good for ALT0, which I think is definitely the strongest option. I'd make a few tweaks to the wording, though, to make it more concise, define "pie" (since it's not that common as a verb), and remove the identity of the thrower (which doesn't add much as not too many readers will know who he is). That leaves us with ALT0a: ...that an environmentalist threw a pie in the face of the author of The Skeptical Environmentalist?
If that works for you, this should be good to go. Sdkb talk 01:22, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, @Sdkb:! Your proposed alt is fine with me :) Arcahaeoindris (talk) 09:02, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Icosian game
- ... that although the icosian game was advertised as "a highly amusing game for the drawing room", it was too easy to play and few copies were sold?
- Source: For quote from 1859 ad, see Turner (1987); for the claims that it was too easy and not successful see Sowell (2001), https://scholarship.claremont.edu/hmnj/vol1/iss24/14 (and note the dates of these are pre-Wikipedia, too early to be circular references)
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 183 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.—David Eppstein (talk) 06:51, 27 April 2024 (UTC).
- Date, expansion, hook, close paraphrase check, QPQ checks out. --Soman (talk) 11:11, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Marcus Jacob Papilaja
- ... that to mitigate religious violence in the city, Ambon mayor Marcus Jacob Papilaja made Muslim and Christian city employees mix? Source: [19], p155: "Mayor Papilaja [...] consolidated the governmental bureaucracy by, first, suggesting Christian and Muslim employees mix in the office. Since the “January 19” incident, Papilaja said, the government employees, even in the same room, tended to group along religious lines due to fear and suspicion to other opposing religious communities."
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 219 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Juxlos (talk) 08:20, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:37, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. QPQ pending. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:41, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: QPQ added. Juxlos (talk) 17:05, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Heaven on Earth: Art from Islamic Lands
- ... that the exhibition Heaven on Earth: Art from Islamic Lands included art from the 8th to 19th centuries (example pictured)? Source: "The exhibition packs a wealth of history into the five Hermitage rooms featuring artefacts relating to Islamic culture spanning the 8th to 19th centuries", Antiques Trade Gazette. That the box in the image was part of the exhibition is shown on page 193 of the printed catalogue by Mikhail Piotrovsky and J. M. Rogers.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 33 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.MartinPoulter (talk) 14:37, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
- Date, length, hook, close paraphrase check, qpq checks out. Image free on Commons. --Soman (talk) 21:13, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Coulrophilia
- ... that in 2016, women were 33% more likely to search for clown porn than men? Source: https://www.vice.com/en/article/ev47da/inside-the-kinky-brightly-colored-world-of-clown-fetishists
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Di (they-them) (talk) 22:53, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Well that's a quite interesting topic. Everything checks out! Skyshiftertalk 19:45, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
German atrocities committed against Soviet prisoners of war
- ... that Soviet prisoners of war were the second-largest group of victims of Nazi mass killing? Source: Kay 2021, p. 294.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 244 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.(t · c) buidhe 23:44, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
- Nominated soon enough after GA. Meets length and citation requirements. Hook is absolutely interesting and the right length. The content of the hook is referenced in the article and a citation is appended immediately after where it appears. The image appears to come from a Nazi German government source, which means it's almost certainly in the public domain. Only concern is with the image's visibility at a smaller scale; going to just leave that up to promoter discretion. QPQ done (a quick-fail of novice nomination). Overall great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:47, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
John Gould Stephenson
- ... that John Gould Stephenson fought at the Battle of Gettysburg while working as the Librarian of Congress? Source: https://www.jstor.org/stable/29781670 pg. 86
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 42 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 08:37, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
- Really lovely expansion today, long enough, no plagiarism issues, very interesting hook with a reliable source. Thanks for this! Spaghettifier (talk) 22:43, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Vulcan Bridge
- ... that Vulcan Bridge, a bridge in Vulcan, West Virginia, was constructed after the mayor requested financial aid from the Soviet Union? Source: https://news.google.com/newspapers?id=0g0wAAAAIBAJ&sjid=sgUEAAAAIBAJ&pg=2235,462258
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Kentuckian |💬 13:34, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article length is good, QPQ not needed, article uses reliable sources and passes GNG, WP:EARWIG turns up with no copyvios. Hook is interesting and backed up by source. Overall, good to go in my opinion! Di (they-them) (talk) 22:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 25[edit]
Satanoperca lilith
- ... that a species of Brazilian cichlid is named after both Satan and Lilith? Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that the cichlid Satanoperca lilith is used as traditional medicine by the Ribeirinhos people of Brazil? Source: [2]
- ALT2: ... that the cichlid Satanoperca lilith is used as bait by boat tour operators to attract Amazon river dolphins? Source: [3]
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Kodiak Blackjack (talk) • (contribs) 22:36, 25 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Preference for the original hook - this genus has quite a few interesting names! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:01, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Kullander, Sven O.; Ferreira, Efrem Jorge Gondim (January 1988). "A new Satanoperca species (Teleostei, Cichlidae) from the Amazon River basin in Brazil". Cybium, International Journal of Ichthyology. 12 (4): 343–355. Retrieved 25 April 2024.
- ^ da Silva, Andrea Leme; Begossi, Alpina (27 November 2007). "Biodiversity, food consumption and ecological niche dimension: a study case of the riverine populations from the Rio Negro, Amazonia, Brazil". Environment, Development and Sustainability. 11 (3): 495. doi:10.1007/s10668-007-9126-z. Retrieved 25 April 2024.
Fish recommended to be eaten by ill persons are pacu, aracu, cara (several Cichlidae species, such as Uaru spp., Heros sp., Satanoperca lilith), and trahira (Hoplias malabaricus).
- ^ Fung, Cadi Y.; Peter, Brad G.; Simmons, Cynthia S. (29 November 2023) [14 August 2023]. "Habitat Mapping and Spatiotemporal Overlap of the Amazon River Dolphin, Fishers, and Tourism in the Central Region of the Brazilian Amazon". Conservation. 3 (4): 523–542. doi:10.3390/conservation3040034.
Lunch (song)
- ... that after being outed by a reporter, Billie Eilish became more open about her bisexuality, even including a song about lesbian sex on her upcoming album? Source: Gay Times, The Cut
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/September 2023 New York floods
- Comment: Open to alternatives.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page. PSA 🏕️ (talk) 03:39, 26 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Generally well-written, sources are okay, hook is interesting. Just a small recommendation, links to Rolling Stone and Coachella 2024 can be added. Good to go! Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 11:10, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Hooks must not be likely to change, and that album's probably going to come out. (Probably.)--Launchballer 23:15, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 26[edit]
Southern Railway Building
- ... that the trowel and gavel used at the cornerstone laying ceremony of the Southern Railway Building (pictured) were the same as those used by George Washington at the U.S. Capitol?
- Source: "Southern Railroad cornerstone laid". The Washington Post. December 21, 1928. p. 20.
- ALT1: ... that the trowel and gavel used at the cornerstone laying ceremony of the Southern Railway Building (pictured) were the same as those used for that purpose by George Washington at the U.S. Capitol? Source: Same as ALT0
- ALT2: ... that the trowel and gavel used at the cornerstone laying ceremony of the Southern Railway Building (pictured) were the same as those used by George Washington at the U.S. Capitol's ceremony?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Freedom from Fear: The American People in Depression and War, 1929–1945
- Comment: I'm too close to this and have re-read it too many times to decide which wording is best, suggestions welcome
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.DrOrinScrivello (talk) 16:06, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
- ALT3: ... that the cornerstone laying ceremonies of the Southern Railway Building (pictured) and the U.S. Capitol used the same trowel and gavel?--Launchballer 08:43, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, Launchballer. Ideally I'd like to include Washington in the hook, but it might just make it too wordy to do so. I like your ALT though, and wouldn't object to it being used.DrOrinScrivello (talk) 13:17, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- Article is new enough and long enough.
- There's a few phrases from National Register of Historic Places Registration Form which could be rewritten to avoid WP:CLOP issues, but I don't see anything severe enough to make a fuss over.
- Sources all appear to be WP:RS
- QPQ satisfied.
- Any of ALT0, ALT1, ALT2, or ALT3 are approved, but ALT0 seems the best. I'll also suggest that "the same as" could be dropped to save a few words without changing the meaning; I'll leave it up to the promoter to decide if they want to do that. RoySmith (talk) 16:18, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Strategion
- ... that while going to the Strategion in Constantinople, Emperor Theodosius II was attacked with stones by a hungry mob?
- Source: At this time, while the Emperor Theodosious [II] was in procession to the public granaries, he was pelted with stones by a hungry populace... Westbrook (2013), p. 10
- ALT1: ... that the merchants of sheep were allowed to sell their livestock in the Strategion in Constantinople until the first day of Lent? Source: C'est au Strategion...que les merchands de moutons peuvent vendre leurs betes, et cela jusqu'au premier jour de careme. Janin (1950), p. 96
- Reviewed: Fang Gan
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 80 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Alex2006 (talk) 07:39, 27 April 2024 (UTC).
- The article was created yesterday, so is new enough. It is much more than long enough and properly uses in-line citations. AGF on proper paraphrasing of the offline sources was used. Both hooks are interesting and cited in-line, with the first one being better I think (though perhaps need some commas?). The only thing holding up this review, Alessandro57, is that the QPQ hasn't been done yet. SilverserenC 21:37, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- I see that you're still editing, Alessandro57. Were you planning on doing a QPQ review or is this nomination abandoned? SilverserenC 23:46, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Josephine Kenyon
- ... that Josephine Kenyon was one of the earliest women to graduate from the Johns Hopkins School of Medicine?
- Source: Opitz, Donald L. "Kenyon, Josephine Hemenway (1880-1965), pediatrician and health educator." American National Biography. February, 2000. Oxford University Press., JOSEPHINE KENYON, PEDIATRICIAN, DEAD". The New York Times. 1965-01-11. p. 45.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Feel free to share your alt blurbs.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.X (talk) 23:50, 26 April 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing... New enough, long enough, Earwig's copyvio <1%. Whispyhistory (talk) 04:08, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- ... Thank you for this interesting article. It reads well and follows the main refernece closely. QPQ not required. Hook is in article and referenced, but is quite general. Can you think of a more specific hook to her? Whispyhistory (talk) 15:18, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that editions of Josephine Kenyon's book Healthy Babies Are Happy Babies increasingly moved away from their original recommendations of rigid scheduling to "on-demand" scheduling based on the child? Source: Opitz, Donald: 'During the course of the book’s five revisions ... her trend in pediatric advice shifted from an emphasis on following rigid schedules to attending to a child’s “on-demand” schedule.' Possible Alt, 198 characters, suggested by Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 21:41, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Mary Mark Ockerbloom:... I was thinking of a hook along that topic too, but it would be good to shorten and simplify. Whispyhistory (talk) 19:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that Josephine Kenyon moved from recommendations of rigid scheduling to "on-demand" scheduling in editions of her book Healthy Babies Are Happy Babies? (Same sources as ALt1)
- Thank you... looks good. How about a hook containing 'good housekeeping'? There may be something in this reference p. 102. Whispyhistory (talk) 20:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Approving ALT2... I don't think the quote marks are needed as it appears a common term when I searched literature on the topic. Possibly link the book. The hook is in the article and in the main source. Thank you both. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:25, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Hong Kong v Inter Miami
- ... that Lionel Messi has provoked geopolitical tensions across China, the United States, Argentina, Japan and Hong Kong due to his absence from a match?
- Reviewed:
- Comment: This is my first DYK nomination so please remind me if there is anything missing or should be improved. Thanks.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.~~ J. Dann 15:04, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
- What a ride that article was. QPQ not needed. Earwig has a high score for copyvio detection, but that's entirely due to Messi's paragraph-long statement in the "Departure and Japan trip" section, which has an inline citation to the flagged source. Referencing is adequate and length/newness criteria fulfilled. Hook is definitely interesting and cited in source, not cited inline as exact phrasing but separately so. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 10:13, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Cypp0847 and Juxlos: I have tagged the article for copyediting, as there are grammar-related issues throughout the article (tenses, for instance, are very often incorrect). This needs to be resolved before a DYK run. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:39, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Ludwell–Paradise House
- ... that John D. Rockefeller Jr., under the name "David's Father", secretly authorized the purchase of an $8,000 "antique" (pictured)?
- Source: Kopper, Philip (1986). Colonial Williamsburg. New York City: Harry N. Abrams, Inc., Colonial Williamsburg Foundation.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/German atrocities committed against Soviet prisoners of war
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 48 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Pbritti (talk) 21:48, 26 April 2024 (UTC).
- AGF on offline book source. Article expansion is sufficient and recent, QPQ done. No copyvio is detected, Earwig flags a bibliography item and a direct quote only. Hook is good. To DYKA you go. Juxlos (talk) 17:04, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
Rosal, Sutherland
- ... that Rosal was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver, shortly before it was deserted entirely?
- Source: Maverik Guide to Scotland p512
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.-- D'n'B-t -- 16:15, 26 April 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, and properly sourced. No QPQ needed. Earwig found no problematic copied wording. Good-enough hook, but one must synthesize a couple pieces of information in the article to obtain it: the "largest township" part is at the end of the town section, dated to the early 19th century, while the "deserted" part is at the end of the "clearance" section. In fact both facts are adjacent in the "Maverick Guide to Scotland" source, with much tighter dating (largest in 1815; cleared between 1814 and 1818) and to avoid problems with WP:SYN the article would benefit from making them adjacent somewhere within it, footnoted to that source. Also, "deserted" is maybe a euphemism for what happened. —David Eppstein (talk) 18:14, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks David. What if the sentence in the Town section said "Before the clearance, it was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver"? That would would be consistent with the Maverick Guide guide source and not change up the current before-during-after structure. I could also change the sentence in the Clearance section to say "completely deserted by 1818" to avoid any ambiguity.
- I think "deserted" is, from a NPOV, the end result of what happened, it describes what's left. You could say "forcibly depopulated" or something but I think "deserted" is clear enough and used in the sources. -- D'n'B-t -- 18:42, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- To me, "deserted" is an accurate and neutral description of the state of the place now, but not of the process by which it reached that state. How about
- ALT1 ... that before its inhabitants were evicted, Rosal was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver?
- but that would require a new reviewer as I can't both propose hooks and approve them. —David Eppstein (talk) 19:00, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- To me, "deserted" is an accurate and neutral description of the state of the place now, but not of the process by which it reached that state. How about
Articles created/expanded on April 27[edit]
NBV21
- ... that five new animals were added to the NBV21?
- ALT1: ... that Job no longer acknowledges guilt in the NBV21? Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20211204103949/https://debijbel.nl/bericht/een-ommekeer-voor-de-ommekeer-van-job
- ALT1a: ... that a 2021 Dutch translation of the Bible omits Job's acknowledgement of guilt?
- ALT2: ... that reverential capitalization was implemented in the NBV21 after public demand? Source: https://www.trouw.nl/religie-filosofie/verzet-tegen-god-als-hij-houdt-aan~b48f3404/
- ALT2a: ... that after public demand, a 2021 Dutch translation of the Bible implemented reverential capitalization of the personal pronouns He/Him for God, Jesus, and the Holy Ghost?
- Reviewed:
- Comment: here goes
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.―Howard • 🌽33 18:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC).
- Hooks should probably explain what NBV21 is per WP:DYKHOOKSTYLE.--Launchballer 20:10, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- By proposing new ALTs, either as part of a comment or by adding to the 'pile' above. I've rewritten the three hooks proposed (wasn't immediately sure what 'reverential capitalization' was either, so I've added some context for that as well). Full review needed.--Launchballer 07:16, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- Article looks long enough, new enough, cited well, and well-written. I prefer ALT0a and ALT2a. Luiysia (talk) 16:55, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
I Gusti Ngurah Jaya Negara
- ... that Denpasar, Indonesia mayor I Gusti Ngurah Jaya Negara became active in politics after he was laid off from a bank due to the Asian financial crisis? Source: [20]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hong Kong v Inter Miami
- Comment: -
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 222 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Juxlos (talk) 05:13, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new, long enough, neutral and presentable. It cites sources inline. All sources are in foreign language. The hook is well-formatted and interesting. Its size is within limit. It is partly cited inline. The sentence ending with "... was laid off in 1998" needs to be cited inline. I understand from the article that he is somewhat the co-mayor. If it is correct, then the hook needs to be altered. Please advise. QPQ was done. CeeGee 11:45, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- @CeeGee: Inline citation added. The guy is the mayor - not entirely sure what you meant by comayor, but his running mate became vice mayor. Juxlos (talk) 00:45, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
Sunlight before signing
- ... that Barack Obama made an election promise to make non-emergency bills freely available online for a five-day public consultation period under Sunlight before signing?
- Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2009/06/22/us/politics/22pledge.html - "During the presidential campaign, Barack Obama promised that once a bill was passed by Congress, the White House would post it online for five days before he signed it."
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.GobsPint (talk) 06:13, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
- Comment: The article is relatively short and needs further development before being highlighted; the topic is an interesting one, but the hook could do with being shorter. Perhaps,
Alt1 ... that Barack Obama promised to make bills freely available online for public consultation under Sunlight before signing? Klbrain (talk) 19:34, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I mean, numerically it's over the limit, but as written, this article would deserve {{no lead}}, and one should be added.--Launchballer 19:56, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment. Lots of good comments but nobody appears to have reviewed. So I guess I will take it on.4meter4 (talk) 22:50, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Article is new enough. It's long enough even after removing the large blocks of quoted text. Earwig did flag copyright violation, but this was due to the large blocks of quoted text which have been properly attributed and are within policy. No close paraphrasing or copyright found, and the article appears to be within policy in all other measures. Hook fact and length both check out for the original and Alt1 hooks. I leave it to the promoter to decide which hook wording they prefer to promote.4meter4 (talk) 23:03, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Robyn Gigl
- ... that the Robyn Gigl novel By Way of Sorrow, which features a transgender lawyer protagonist, was described as "quietly groundbreaking" by The New York Times? Source: NYT article from 2021 (possibly paywalled)
- ALT1: ... that Robyn Gigl, a transgender lawyer, has written a series of legal thrillers with a transgender lawyer protagonist? Source: article from the New Jersey State Bar Association
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lester Allen
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Bridget (talk) 15:08, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article is long and new enough, and properly sourced. There are no BLP issues. Both hooks are interesting. ALT0 is properly cited but I'm unsure about ALT1. Waiting on that QPQ. 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 15:51, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Hi LunaEclipse, I'm definitely leaning more towards ALT0, since it's focused on the critical reception of her work featuring a trans character, rather than the focus solely on the fact that Gigl and her character are trans. I've just added a DYK that I just reviewed. Thanks for taking a look at this! Best, Bridget (talk) 00:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- The facts for ALT1 are supported but the phrasing seems a little awkward. How about
- ALT2: ... that Robyn Gigl, who has written a series of legal thrillers with a transgender lawyer protagonist, transitioned after becoming the managing partner of her legal firm? Source: article from the New Jersey State Bar Association Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 01:02, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Elizabeth Seifert
- ... that Elizabeth Seifert quit medical school after only one year as she was denied a medical degree due to her gender, went on to publish more than 80 novels in her career?
- ALT1: ... that Elizabeth Seifert, who was denied a medical degree due to her gender, went on to achieve success as a writer, penning over 80 novels about the very field she had been excluded from? Source: Elizabeth Seifert, who quit medical school after 1 years... by UPI, The Bulletin 19 Jun 1983, Ottawa Citizen 20 Jun 1983
- ALT2: ... that despite being barred from pursuing a career in medicine due to her gender, Elizabeth Seifert went on to write over 80 novels about doctors and the medical field? Source: Elizabeth Seifert, who quit medical school after 1 years... by UPI, The Bulletin 19 Jun 1983, Ottawa Citizen 20 Jun 1983
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- Comment: Or more versions of the same. Please feel free to suggest!
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.X (talk) 10:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article created 27 April. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hooks are all interesting and sourced. QPQ is not required. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 15:36, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Nellie McCoy
- ... that actress Nellie McCoy suffered a mental breakdown after her theatre performance was criticized, leading to her being committed to a sanitorium?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Strategion
- Comment: Article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 116 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.SilverserenC 22:19, 27 April 2024 (UTC).
- Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 00:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I also used this source (which is also cited in the article) to verify the hook. Cunard (talk) 00:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 28[edit]
Anne Griffiths
- ... that librarian Anne Griffiths was one of the first British women to cross the Antarctic Circle?
- Source: "one of the first two British women to cross the Antarctic Circle" [21]
- ALT1: ... that librarian Anne Griffiths was one of the few non-royals invited to Prince Philip's 90th birthday lunch? Source: "In 2011 she was one of the few non-royal guests invited to his 90th birthday luncheon at Windsor Castle." [22]
- Reviewed: [[]]
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Mystery Merrivale (talk) 19:06, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: AGF for paywalled sources. Everything looks solid! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:41, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Rahmad Mas'ud
- ... that Indonesian politician Rahmad Mas'ud received his master's degree simultaneously with four of his siblings? Source: [23]: "Lima dari delapan bersaudara Bani Mas’ud atau anak keturunan H Mas’ud, baru saja menyelesaikan studi Magister Ekonomi di Universitas Mulawarman (Unmul) secara bersamaan."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hilda Hope McMaugh
- Comment: Wanted to make articles for his other siblings, but they seem to have less coverage and might struggle to hit 1500 characters
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 220 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Juxlos (talk) 05:32, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Was unable to access the Koran Kaltim source (blocked me for some reason), but I was able to confirm the hook fact from other sources. Hook is interesting, article is neutral, so it looks good to go! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:52, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Boroline
- ... that the antiseptic cream Boroline was marketed to appeal to nationalistic sentiments?
- ALT1: ... that over 100,000 samples of the antiseptic cream Boroline were distributed for free when India became independent? Source: https://www.thejuggernaut.com/bengali-antiseptic-cream-boroline-swadeshi-movement
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Townsends
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Sohom (talk) 16:25, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
- Article recently expanded. No copyvio detected, and QPQ is done. Hook is verified in sources and cited inline. Preference for original hook. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 05:02, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
James White (inventor)
- ... that Napoleon awarded a medal to English inventor James White?
- Source: Dickinson, H.W. (1951). "James White and his "New Century of Inventions"". Transactions of the Newcomen Society. 27 (1). doi:10.1179/tns.1949.016. p. 176
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 44 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:44, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline hook source. @Generalissima: The only thing is that I think there needs to be a direct cite for the sentence BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:48, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
For this invention, White received a medal from First Consul Napoleon Bonaparte
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- @BeanieFan11: Oops! fixed. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:51, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
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Olga Lander
- ... that Olga Lander used a fixed 50 mm focal length camera, requiring her to work close to the dangerous war-time subjects she photographed (example pictured)?
- Source: https://www.berliner-zeitung.de/archiv/fotos-von-kriegsfotografin-olga-lander-versehrte-koerper-unter-blumenschmuck-li.1359122 Translated as "Lander was equipped with a FED camera, a Soviet replica of the Leica with a 50 mm focal length. This meant that she could not zoom in ... if she wanted to take close-ups ... she acted accordingly, even if her life was in danger, as her photos of battles show."
- Reviewed: The Lord Chamberlain’s plays
- Comment: This article fits WikiProject Women in Red's Press women theme for May
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 80 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 00:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting life and work, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I approve the hook, and it goes well with the current trend for short "hooky" wording. I wonder, however, if - since her name doesn't give much clue to where she comes from - some hint at place and/or time might add interest. I found interesting, for example, that she took pics in both world wars. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- How about including her photo, which - with a year in the caption - would add some time? It would illustrate the hook perfectly although it is not strictly she who is pictured. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:16, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I've added the photo as you suggest. Regarding the hook info, if you don't tell them everything, they have to click through to find out, right? Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 13:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the image which tells what I missed. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:02, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- adding to approval: the image is licensed and a great illustration of the kind of photos she took. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:38, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I've added the photo as you suggest. Regarding the hook info, if you don't tell them everything, they have to click through to find out, right? Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 13:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Foundation of the Communist Party of India
- ... that within the Indian communist movement there is a dispute on whether the Communist Party of India (flag pictured) was founded in Tashkent in 1920 or Kanpur in 1925?
- Source: Kiran Saxena (1990). Trade Union Movement and the National Movement. South Asian Publishers. p. 128. ISBN 978-81-7003-116-1.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 380 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Soman (talk) 21:16, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: This is a very nicely-written and well-researched article, with quite the interesting hook for DYK. Excellent work on this! Only real issue is that it's currently tagged as an orphan, this can be remedied by linking to this article from at least one other article. Ping me once this is done and I'll be happy to approve this. (I'm also not convinced that the picture is necessary for this kind of a hook, but its inclusion is up to the DYK coordinators) Grnrchst (talk) 14:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
The Lord Chamberlain's plays
- ... that the Lord Chamberlain was the official theatrical censor in England for over 200 years until 1968 with the power to prevent any new play from being performed, often for blasphemy or indecency?
- ALT1: ... that the Lord Chamberlain's plays are a historical archive of play scripts curated through theatrical censorship that provide a unique insight to attitudes to race and sexuality?
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Nick Sheppard (talk) 14:55, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
- Which part of this hook is supposed to link to The Lord Chamberlain's plays?--Launchballer 15:07, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- fair point, novice at DYK…is update any good?
- I've suggested a possibility of linking for the original alt. Someone else may have a better idea of whether this complies appropriately with best practice for formatting a DYK hook. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 21:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: I prefer ALT1 to ALT. The hook length is acceptable for both. ALT has a couple of issues: the title of the article does not appear, but more importantly, the idea of the office's powers is not clearly conveyed: it currently says "for over 200 years until 1968 with the power to prevent ANY new play from being performed". However, those powers were somewhat restricted after 1843, so to say ANY new play could be restricted after 1843 is perhaps misleading. This hook could be rephrased slightly, but at this point, for both reasons, I recommend ALT1 instead. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 23:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Peale's Philadelphia Museum
... that exhibits at Peale's Philadelphia Museum included the first known skeleton of a mastodon (excavation pictured)?Source: Semonin, Paul (2000). American Monster: How the Nation's First Prehistoric Creature Became a Symbol of National Identity. NYU Press. p. 5 "Charles Willson Peale and his son Rembrandt excavated the first complete skeleton of the American incognitum, or mastodon" "when the mounted skeleton was placed in their Philadelphia Museum for public viewing".
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.TSventon (talk) 21:05, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I don't see anything in the guidelines about QPQs needing to be done recently, but this one was done in 2021 and hasn't been used as a QPQ by the nominator before. If that's okay, then this nom is good to go. voorts (talk/contributions) 23:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Voorts, thank you for the review, I tried to do a few QPQs before I needed them and they have got rather old. Fortunately WP:QPQ says QPQs do not expire and may be used at any time for a future DYK nomination. TSventon (talk) 00:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Voorts and TSventon: I cannot confirm in any sources that this was the first known skeleton. Maybe first "complete" can be investigated if sources support? I do see a source for "Peale eventually founded the first natural history museum in the United States". But I do not know about the reliability of the source (czasopisma) - that can be investigated for a hook idea, or you can introduce a different hook. Bruxton (talk) 15:39, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@Voorts and Bruxton: I was trying to put the hook in my own words and overdid the paraphrasing. When Semonin says the skeleton was complete I think he meant almost complete so I have reworded the article and the hook. Peale's museum as "the first natural history museum in the United States" is arguable, but would need more work. This argued it was not.
- Alt1 ... that exhibits at Peale's Philadelphia Museum included the first nearly complete skeleton of a mastodon (excavation pictured)? Source: Mysteries of the First Mastodon https://americanart.si.edu/blog/mysteries-first-mastodon-conservators-perspective
TSventon (talk) 23:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. It is difficult to find the hook because it is not explicit in the article. I did find the two parts to the hook in The Peale Mastodon section so ALT1 works. Bruxton (talk) 14:03, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- The hook is explicit but unreferenced in the lead, I could add a reference to the Smithsonian article there if that made things clearer. In the body one of the sentences was not immediately followed by a reference, so I fixed that.
- By the way, on the first museum, I have seen things like the first successful public museum of natural history, but that would need to be discussed in the article and is not particularly hooky. TSventon (talk) 14:23, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. It is difficult to find the hook because it is not explicit in the article. I did find the two parts to the hook in The Peale Mastodon section so ALT1 works. Bruxton (talk) 14:03, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Aza Arnold
- ... that within years of Aza Arnold inventing a device to improve cotton roving, it was plagiarized across the United States and Europe?
- Source: Jeremy, D. J. (1981). Technological diffusion—the case of the differential gear. Industrial Archaeology Review, 5(3), 217–227. doi:10.1179/iar.1981.5.3.217
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 43 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:22, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline source. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:27, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 29[edit]
DellaXOZ
- ... that the TikTok success of DellaXOZ's "Ahh!!" prompted a lawyer to contact her? Source: https://www.thelineofbestfit.com/features/interviews/dellaxoz-on-the-rise
- ALT1: ... that DellaXOZ began making music aged twelve? Source: per ALT0
- ALT2: ... that the Manchester-based musician DellaXOZ is a member of a London-based collective of women and non-binary artists? Source: https://newsroom.spotify.com/2023-05-02/our-generation-comes-to-life-with-irl-event-space-from-illustrator-eliza-williams/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Toy Town
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 225 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 12:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC).
- New enough and long enough. QPQ present. Hook fact checks out to source. Strong preference for ALT0 as more distinctive than ALT1 or ALT2. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:16, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
2024 Southeast Asia heat wave
- ... that due to a 2024 heat wave in Southeast Asia, heat indices in the Philippines rose to dangerous levels as high as 51 °C or 124 °F?
- Source: Rappler
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 18 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page. PSA 🏕️ (talk) 11:35, 29 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: recently created, QPQ done, interesting hook that is cited. Looks good to go, but please expand the lede a little bit. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:09, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Robertsky and PSA: An article with a lede that short would deserve {{lead too short}}, so yeah, what Makeandtoss said.--Launchballer 09:07, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Elizabeth Yeampierre
- ... that Elizabeth Yeampierre calls Puerto Rico the "poster child for climate injustice" due to the devastation caused by Hurricane Maria?
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.CaptainAngus (talk) 01:50, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
- Final free-QPQ nom from nominator. Article of sufficient length and newness. Hook interesting and cited in source (well, quoted inline). Earwig detects no copyvio aside from again direct quotes. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 06:12, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Evgeniia Subbotina
- ... that although Evgeniia Subbotina herself failed to escape her exile in Siberia, she successfully aided the escape of Catherine Breshkovsky, Yelizaveta Kovalskaya and Sofya Bogomolets?
- Source: Shilov, A. A.; Karnaukhova, M. G., eds. (1932). "Субботина, Евгения Дмитриевна" [Subbotina, Evgeniia Dmitrievna]. Деятели революционного движения в России (in Russian). Vol. 4. Moscow: Society of Former Political Prisoners and Exiled Settlers. p. 1635–1636. OCLC 749336544.
С помощью А. Лу. кашевича пыталась 28 янв. 1879 г. бежать; добралась до Иркутска, где была задержана 29 янв. т. г. Признанная ген.-губернаторок виновной в самовольн. отлучке, подвергнута 7-дневн. аресту при Иркутск. тюремн. Зам. к. азатем выслана в Верхоленск (Иркутск. губ.) с ением за ней особ. [...] В 1881 г. переведена в Иркутск, где жила с В. Александровой-Натансон, Принимала вместе с нею участие в денежной помощи и в организации побегов Е. Брешко-Брешковской из Баргузина и Е. Ковальской и С. Богомолец из Иркутск.
[With the help of A. L. Kashevich she tried to escape on 28 January 1879; she reached Irkutsk, where she was detained on 29 January of that year. Found guilty of AWOL by the Governor-General, she was subjected to a 7-day arrest at the Irkutsk prison. She was deported to Verkholensk (Irkutsk province) and then deported with a special charge. [...] In 1881, she was transferred to Irkutsk, where she lived with V. Alexandrova-Natanson; she took part with her in providing monetary aid and in organising the escape of E. Breshko-Breshkovskaya from Barguzin and E. Kovalskaya and S. Bogomolets from Irkutsk.]
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 35 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Grnrchst (talk) 14:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Thanks for creating this. I've read some interesting first person accounts that mention the women Russian exiles. Please tag me once the missing citation is added. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 01:33, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Mary Mark Ockerbloom: I'm confused as to why this claim needs a citation? She collaborated on Lavrov's Vpered, was involved in a Narodnik organisation, was tried in two mass trials of Narodnik revolutionaries and actively organised with other Narodniks for decades. Is it not exceedingly obvious that this was the movement she was involved in? --Grnrchst (talk) 08:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Grnrchst: Yes, but all of that relies on the reader having knowledge of what that movement was and who it involved. For a Wikipedia reader who follows the hook to a topic that they aren't knowledgeable about, none of that is obvious. So I would suggest adding a sentence or phrase later in the body that in which you explicitly use the term Narodnik, with a citation to something that clarifies or at least uses that term. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 12:15, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Mary Mark Ockerbloom: Ok, I've just removed it from the lead. --Grnrchst (talk) 12:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Grnrchst: As you wish, good to go. All the best, Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 13:07, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Mary Mark Ockerbloom: Ok, I've just removed it from the lead. --Grnrchst (talk) 12:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 30[edit]
Bill McNulty
- ... that when the Oakland Athletics promoted Bill McNulty to the major leagues, they needed forest rangers to find him?
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 531 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.– Muboshgu (talk) 03:40, 2 May 2024 (UTC).
- Yup this one is definitely good to go. Was expanded the required amount within the allotted time frame. Long enough, well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant and copy-vio free. Earwig pops up low violation %. Article is presentable, sourced well, and QPQ is done. Hook is interesting as well. Def good to go :) Soulbust (talk) 01:19, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
List of Detroit Lions Pro Bowl selections
- ... that Barry Sanders was the first player to play at least 10 seasons in the National Football League and be selected to the Pro Bowl in each year? Source: Sports Illustrated]
- Reviewed: Not applicable (fourth nomination)
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Hey man im josh (talk) 15:16, 6 May 2024 (UTC).
- As a lifelong Lions fan due to watching Barry play in my formative years, I'm happy to review this. The article is new enough, long enough, and well sourced. Tone is neutral, Earwig is clean, and a spot check showed no issues. QPQ not needed. The hook is interesting and well-sourced, but unless I'm missing it, it doesn't appear in the actual article. The prose mentions he shares the team record for selections, and an image caption mentions he was chosen every season he played, but there's nothing about being the first NFL player to play at least ten seasons and be selected each year. @Hey man im josh: if you'll just include the fact in the article's prose and cite the SI article this should be good to go. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 21:18, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Well that's embarrassing. I guess I had so many revisions and write ups I somehow accidently left it out altogether!! I've made sure it's now included in the prose. Thanks @DrOrinScrivello. Hey man im josh (talk) 13:32, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- No worries, happens to the best of us! This is now ready for the Main Page. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 13:44, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Timeline of the 1993 Atlantic hurricane season
... that in 1993, all Atlantic hurricane activity ended two full months early?
- https://www.nhc.noaa.gov/climo/ ("The Atlantic hurricane season runs from June 1 to November 30.")
- Page 871 of https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/mwre/123/3/1520-0493_1995_123_0871_ahso_2_0_co_2.xml?tab_body=pdf ("...the last named storm (Harvey) lost its tropical characteristics on 21 September. This is the earliest conclusion to tropical storms and hurricanes in a season since 1930.") Also the Atlantic hurricane database. A guide on how to read it is available here; while that page is a guide for the Eastern Pacific database, the Atlantic database is formatted the same way.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Epipterygium opararense
- Comment: This is in fact my seventh nomination; the first three were in 2009, outside the range of the QPQ tool.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 21:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
- Unfortunately, I'm not sure we can consider this a new article. There was a pre-existing article at this title from 2008-2011 prior to it being redirected which substantially overlaps with the construction and content in the current article. That content is still in the article history. For this reason, we probably would need to consider this a 5x expansion, as opposed to a new article created from a page that was always a redirect. In doing a character count, the current prose count is 22487 characters. The prior article was 6062 characters. A 5x expansion would require 30310 characters. The article is currently 7,823 characters short of the required length.4meter4 (talk) 01:41, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: Interesting. WP:DYKNEW does say that articles created from redirects count as new, as do previously deleted articles that have been re-created, but it does not say anything about the middle ground of previously redirected articles being restored (albeit, in this case, in greatly expanded form—I note that the previous article at this title was incomplete, as there was no timeline chronology for the season's two final storms, both of which were hurricanes and one of which killed over 100 people). Also, I thought bulleted text didn't count towards prose size? At the risk of shooting myself in the foot, DYKcheck says that the previous version of the article had 1,816 bytes of prose, while the current version has 4,085 bytes; in this case, I would need almost exactly 5,000 more bytes of prose if this were to be considered a 5x expansion scenario. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 17:57, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Dylan620 Those are some fair points. I don't want to make you go through too many hoops if we don't have to. Let me get some input from others so we can find the most reasonable path forward. To be clear, the former timeline page never went to WP:AFD and was not deleted. It was merged and redirected without any prior discussion that I can find; a decision apparently made by a single editor. Regardless, it may be that only slight expansion of text would be necessary per your understanding of 5x expansion policy. I am going to ask for others to give input on the DYK talk page. Best.4meter4 (talk) 18:17, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: Sounds good. FWIW, there was a merge discussion, though it was a short one. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 18:36, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Dylan620 Those are some fair points. I don't want to make you go through too many hoops if we don't have to. Let me get some input from others so we can find the most reasonable path forward. To be clear, the former timeline page never went to WP:AFD and was not deleted. It was merged and redirected without any prior discussion that I can find; a decision apparently made by a single editor. Regardless, it may be that only slight expansion of text would be necessary per your understanding of 5x expansion policy. I am going to ask for others to give input on the DYK talk page. Best.4meter4 (talk) 18:17, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: Interesting. WP:DYKNEW does say that articles created from redirects count as new, as do previously deleted articles that have been re-created, but it does not say anything about the middle ground of previously redirected articles being restored (albeit, in this case, in greatly expanded form—I note that the previous article at this title was incomplete, as there was no timeline chronology for the season's two final storms, both of which were hurricanes and one of which killed over 100 people). Also, I thought bulleted text didn't count towards prose size? At the risk of shooting myself in the foot, DYKcheck says that the previous version of the article had 1,816 bytes of prose, while the current version has 4,085 bytes; in this case, I would need almost exactly 5,000 more bytes of prose if this were to be considered a 5x expansion scenario. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 17:57, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: 2011 - 1816 characters (283 words) - 2024 4085 characters (612 words): While not 5x, I do think this qualifies as new.--evrik (talk) 18:39, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment. For the sake of keeping a centralized discussion, please refrain from commenting here if this is on determining whether the article should be considered new or not. That discussion is currently taking at Wikipedia talk:Did you know.4meter4 (talk) 19:04, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Dylan620 There is now a clear consensus opinion to consider this a new article. Now on to the review. Article is long enough with the difference in prose count sizes between the old and new versions clearly passing the 1500 prose count length in order to align with the issue raised by BlueMoonset at the DYK talk page discussion. Even if all of the old text was reused from the older version (which it wasn't) there is more than enough new prose to go beyond the 1500 character count as indicated by subtracting the entire length of the original prose from the new version prose count which leaves a balance much higher than 1500 characters. Otherwise the article is within policy and no close plagiarism is detected. My one main issue is the lack of page number citations. It's difficult to check verifiability when citing to an entire reference. That alone isn't enough to derail the nomination, but we must have an inline citation with a specific page number directly after the sentence with the hook fact. That currently is not in the article. If there is a reason multiple page numbers are needed for the hook fact please provide details about exactly where in the text and on what pages the hook fact exists in the cited source. Once that is fixed, I will review the hook.4meter4 (talk) 19:28, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: I have added a page number to the hook source, and also added page numbers where this source is used as a citation in the timeline. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 22:03, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Dylan620 Thanks for working on this, but the specific hook fact sentence still lacks an inline citation immediately after the hook fact. This may seem pedantic, but we do consistently require an inline citation directly after the sentence with the hook fact, even if that means duplicating a citation already used later in the paragraph (annoying I know, but I have to do this too with my nominations). I placed a citation tag needed to help you identify where exactly I am expecting to see a cite. Best.4meter4 (talk) 22:28, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: I've adjusted the refs in the lede a bit; how's it look now? Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 22:44, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Dylan620 Thanks. That's better, although the second cited source came up as dead. Now at looking at the first reference, I am having trouble finding any prose directly stating this fact. Are you essentially analyzing the data yourself to arrive at this conclusion, or am I missing something here? If you are pulling this hook fact out of the data, can you explain exactly how you arrived at that fact? I'll need to double check that this is ok to run. When we start getting into analyses of science data it gets tricky between what can be considered obvious non-controversial interpretation, and what becomes WP:Original synthesis. I'm not saying it is SYNTH, I'm just needing some guidance to know where to look to find the hook fact. Best.4meter4 (talk) 22:56, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: First, apologies for the rollback; that was a misclick which resulted when the 'diff' button slipped out from under me (watchlist was still loading). Second, the cited Monthly Weather Review journal states that no system of at least tropical storm intensity was active after September 21, which (per the NHC's hurricane climatology page, which is also cited) is more than two months before the official end date of November 30. Even including Tropical Depression Ten, which dissipated on September 30 without having ever reached tropical storm status, that's still a full two months before the official end date. Thinking about it a little more, "early" could be on the subjective side, so I'm going to suggest an alt hook:
- ALT1: ... that in 1993, all Atlantic hurricane activity ceased two full months before the season officially ended?
- Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 23:07, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Also, I've fixed the second ref; it was broken because of a typo in the URL, which I'm kind of shocked I didn't detect sooner. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 23:14, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: First, apologies for the rollback; that was a misclick which resulted when the 'diff' button slipped out from under me (watchlist was still loading). Second, the cited Monthly Weather Review journal states that no system of at least tropical storm intensity was active after September 21, which (per the NHC's hurricane climatology page, which is also cited) is more than two months before the official end date of November 30. Even including Tropical Depression Ten, which dissipated on September 30 without having ever reached tropical storm status, that's still a full two months before the official end date. Thinking about it a little more, "early" could be on the subjective side, so I'm going to suggest an alt hook:
- Dylan620 Thanks. That's better, although the second cited source came up as dead. Now at looking at the first reference, I am having trouble finding any prose directly stating this fact. Are you essentially analyzing the data yourself to arrive at this conclusion, or am I missing something here? If you are pulling this hook fact out of the data, can you explain exactly how you arrived at that fact? I'll need to double check that this is ok to run. When we start getting into analyses of science data it gets tricky between what can be considered obvious non-controversial interpretation, and what becomes WP:Original synthesis. I'm not saying it is SYNTH, I'm just needing some guidance to know where to look to find the hook fact. Best.4meter4 (talk) 22:56, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: I've adjusted the refs in the lede a bit; how's it look now? Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 22:44, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Dylan620 Thanks for working on this, but the specific hook fact sentence still lacks an inline citation immediately after the hook fact. This may seem pedantic, but we do consistently require an inline citation directly after the sentence with the hook fact, even if that means duplicating a citation already used later in the paragraph (annoying I know, but I have to do this too with my nominations). I placed a citation tag needed to help you identify where exactly I am expecting to see a cite. Best.4meter4 (talk) 22:28, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
A Charge to Keep I Have
- ... that an 18th-century hymn inspired the title of George W. Bush's 1999 autobiography?
- Source: "The title of the book is based upon a hymn written by Charles Wesley, 'A Charge to Keep I Have'" - George W. Bush, A Charge to Keep, page x.
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Mystery Merrivale (talk) 19:11, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is good, well-sourced, new enough, long enough and free of copyright. I do find the hook to be quite interesting + it is cited. QPQ not required. Template:LunaEatsTunaSig (talk), posted at 21:52, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Jacques Poitras
- ... that journalist Jacques Poitras spent a month repeatedly crossing the "Imaginary Line" separating New Brunswick and Maine in order to publish a book about it?
- Source: https://www.theglobeandmail.com/arts/books-and-media/imaginary-line-life-on-an-unfinished-border-by-jacques-poitras/article4251690/ (repeatedly crossed the book) AND https://theaquinian.net/jacques-poitras-new-book-sheds-light-new-brunswick-maine-border/ (mentions how long he spent)
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.B3251 (talk) 01:30, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Not ready yet, nominator needs a QPQ. Also, how is the Aquinian reliable? 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 22:52, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- The Aquinian is the St. Thomas University (STU)'s student newspaper. Per WP:RSSM as well as general consensus through discussions cited by WP:RSSM, using student media sparingly is generally fine; sometimes it is the only option for certain details/facts, such as in this instance for a general assumption of the subject's age, his connection to the University, and a small detail in the creation process of his book.
- I apologize if you find that The Aquinian seems disputed, but because WP:N and WP:GNG has already been established it should be alright using student media for small bits of the article, as this is an instance where better sources couldn't be found. (this only applies to articles whose subject is connected to the University of said student press, of course, in which this case Poitras is). If it helps, STU has a more "official" magazine where Poitras has a small mention here as a journalism professor, and is mentioned here in a third-party provincial newspaper interview with a STU journalism student.
- I hope this addresses any concerns! QPQ will be finished soon. Thanks, B3251 (talk) 23:54, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
List of New England Revolution managers
- ... that Jay Heaps lost one MLS Cup final as a New England Revolution manager and four as a player?
- ALT1: ... that New England Revolution manager Walter Zenga was let go in 1999 despite being one of the team's best players? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/article/the-boston-globe-sudden-boot-for-zenga/144917794/
- ALT2: ... that New England Revolution manager Bruce Arena led the club to a record-breaking 73 points in the 2021 season? Source: https://www.cbsnews.com/boston/news/new-england-revolution-mls-points-record-regular-season-bruce-arena/
- Reviewed:
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Brindille1 (talk) 03:49, 30 April 2024 (UTC). This was not expanded five-fold in the past week (since 24 April), but great work on the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Me Da Wikipedian (talk • contribs)
- @Me Da Wikipedian: Hey, this article definitely underwent a 5x expansion that finished in the last week. The entirety of the “Managerial History” section is new: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=List_of_New_England_Revolution_managers&oldid=1220820808. If you look before April 22nd, there was even less of a lede: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=List_of_New_England_Revolution_managers&oldid=1219433381. This meets WP:5X as I expanded the article’s prose by 5x, and that effort ended this week. Brindille1 (talk) 13:56, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Brindille1: As far I can tell, there has not been five-fold expansion, but still a lot of it. And for the purposes of DYK only the past week is counted. Put it into a word counter and character counter, everything agrees. Thank you though for expanding it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Me Da Wikipedian (talk • contribs)
- WP:DYKcheck says this was 866 characters as recently as 26 April and is 6476 now. Full review needed.--Launchballer 15:26, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article was nominated within a week of being expanded fivefold. Article coverage is neutral with the prose being consistently backed by reliable, high-quality sources formatted with inline citations. Earwig shows no copyright violations; top result only borrows spoken quotes. Though it's rather embarrassing to see as a Revs fan, ALT0 is unfortunately the most interesting hook out of the bunch, with ALT2 being second-best. All hooks are sourced and mentioned in the prose. No QPQ requirement necessary for this user. Here's to hoping the Revs can at least get the #1 draft pick next year... in the meantime, this nom is good to go! Aria1561 (talk) 23:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Carrie Swain
- ... that Carrie Swain (pictured) was possibly the first woman entertainer to perform in blackface?
- Source: Staples, Shirley (1984). Male-female Comedy Teams in American Vaudeville, 1865-1932. UMI Research Press. p. 58. ISBN 9780835715201.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sunlight before signing
- Comment: moved from draft space on April 30, 2024
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 76 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.4meter4 (talk) 23:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC).
- New, substantial, well-written, no plagiarism detected, image correctly licensed (I tweaked the tag to cover 100+ period of public domain); QPQ done. Hook verified AGF. Dahn (talk) 09:11, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Shiva (British band)
- ... that an accident curtailed Shiva's career? Source: https://worldradiohistory.com/UK/Music-Week/1995/Music-Week-1995-07-01.pdf
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 226 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 10:38, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
- 5x expansion has been done, sources check out, QPQ completed too. Only minor gripe is that the hook is rather vague but everything looks okay otherwise. Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 13:06, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 1[edit]
Hevearita Gunaryanti Rahayu
- ... that a municipal purchase of 177 motorcycles by Semarang, Indonesia mayor Hevearita Gunaryanti Rahayu caused a social media controversy? Source: [26]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Boroline
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Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 221 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Juxlos (talk) 04:57, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The page was created by nominator within seven days of nomination. QPQ done. Hook is verified and article adheres to all criteria. Earwig finds no problems. Nom is good to go. 750h+ 04:32, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Ditto Pölzl
- ... that the communist trade unionist Ditto Pölzl was a member in all of the three provisional state governments of Styria of 1945?
- Source: Österreich in Geschichte und Literatur, Vol. 40-41. Stiasny Verlag, 1996. p. 157
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 381 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Soman (talk) 12:14, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: New enough, long enough, Earwig notes no notable copyvio. Hook is interesting but on an offline source (Österreich in Geschichte und Literatur, Vol. 40-41) so I am assuming good faith. QPQ is completed. Everything seems to check out! Ornithoptera (talk) 05:37, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Lyle Bauer
- ... that Lyle Bauer continued to attend Canadian Football League executive meetings despite being unable to speak due to treatment for stage four throat cancer? Source: National Post
- ALT1: ... that Lyle Bauer helped turn the Winnipeg Blue Bombers's C$5.45 million debt into a reported C$5 million balance? Source: The StarPhoenix (C$5.45m debt); CBC News (C$5m balance)
- Reviewed: Willmer House
- Comment: Eligible per Rule 1d, because it only appeared in the "Recent Deaths" section of ITN and not as a bold link.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 259 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Bloom6132 (talk) 09:22, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Great work on expanding the article! Just the height issue to address and then I'd be happy to pass this. Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 05:56, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Suntooooth: thanks for the review! The source for his height in the infobox is ref 3 (StatsCrew.com) at the very bottom of the box – not that easy to see given the grey background (which I can't change because it's the default). —Bloom6132 (talk) 08:40, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Bloom6132: Ah, sorry for missing that! I'm happy to pass this then. Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 17:28, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Suntooooth: thanks for the review! The source for his height in the infobox is ref 3 (StatsCrew.com) at the very bottom of the box – not that easy to see given the grey background (which I can't change because it's the default). —Bloom6132 (talk) 08:40, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
Apologia Pro Vita Sua
... that while writing his Apologia Pro Vita Sua, John Henry Newman once worked for 22 hours straight in order to have the manuscript for the printer at Newman's door the next morning?
- Source: "He worked hour after hour, up to sixteen hours in one day - once for twenty-two hours running, on May 20th, with Rivington's man at the door next morning." p. 334, first full paragraph
- ALT1: ... that after John Henry Newman wrote his Apologia Pro Vita Sua in response to an attack by Charles Kingsley, Kingsley compared Newman to a "treacherous ape" and implied that he was insane? Source: "If I am to bandy words, it must be with sane persons." and "I cannot be weak enough to put myself a second time ... into the power of one who like a treacherous ape, lifts to you meek and suppliant eyes ... " p. 343, first two full paragraphs
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- Comment: 2nd nom, so no QPQ needed
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Smdjcl (talk) 17:11, 2 May 2024 (UTC).
- Approved: A very nice article, expanded within the window. Both hooks are good and check out. QPQ not required. I like ALT1 better: would suggest amending ALT0 to something like "the manuscript ready for the printer to collect..." in both hook and article, as the "at Newman's door" is a little confusing and not really idiomatic for someone coming to visit him - you could even cut it in the hook, as the interesting thing is the 22-hour day, not where he handed the manuscript over. Would also suggest reworking, in the article,
Newman had been accused of secretly working to convert people to Catholicism while outwardly professing to be Anglican, and this belief persisted even after his conversion to Catholicism in 1845
, as he would hardly be accused of outwardly professing Anglicanism after he had publicly converted to Catholicism. Still, none of these points should be an obstacle at this stage. Good work. UndercoverClassicist T·C 05:52, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- @UndercoverClassicist: Thank you for your review and the kind words, and sorry for disappearing for a couple of days! Those two sentences that you pointed out were definitely the ones I had the most difficulty phrasing (my original draft of that second sentence you mentioned implied that he was still Anglican when he wrote the Apologia!). I've rephrased the sentences in the article, hopefully for the better. As for the hooks, I have no preference, so if you prefer alt1, I'm fine just going with that rather than trying to improve alt0. (Also, looking at the source again, it's not clear if it should be "manuscript" or "proof" - I just had "pamphlet" in the article. Probably better just to avoid that altogether in the hook.) Smdjcl (talk) 02:30, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Don Johnson (basketball)
- ... that Cypress College basketball coach Don Johnson, who was an All-American at UCLA, developed two players with minimal experience who later played for his alma mater and set records in the NBA?
- Source: All-American at UCLA (Los Angeles Times) "Eaton and Swen Nater are Johnson’s legacy--two raw seven-footers, with little or no basketball credentials before Cypress, who spent two years with Johnson and went on to lucrative careers in the NBA." (Los Angeles Times) "But when the massive Eaton enters the game, UCLA will shift to a low-post offense and the Bruin fast break will slow to a snail's pace. Eaton is a 23-year-old former master auto mechanic who learned his basketball at Cypress (Calif.) Community College from the same coach—former UCLA backcourt star Don Johnson—who sent the Bruins Swen Nater." (Sports Illustrated) "Not only did both Nater and Eaton play in the NBA, each still holds league records." (Cypress College)
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 106 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.—Bagumba (talk) 10:15, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
- New article that was created on 1 May 2024 is 4,704 characters and nominated two days later. No copyvios detected (AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 193 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. Refs 11, 20, 21, and 22 (verifying the hook) are reliable sources. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 13:16, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Saparinah Sadli
- ... that Saparinah Sadli was the first chairperson of Indonesia's National Commission on Violence against Women?
- ALT1: ... that Saparinah Sadli defended one of her former students when Indonesia's State Intelligence Agency challenged her gendered exploration of the New Order regime? Source: https://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2011/10/12/saparinah-sadli-a-feminist-transformation.html
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Nighat Arif
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 657 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:10, 2 May 2024 (UTC).
- New article that was moved to mainspace on 2 May 2024 is 5,109 characters and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Main hook is 108 characters long (ALT1 is 160); both are under 200 character max. and are interesting. Refs 2 (verifying ALT1) and 5 (verifying the main hook) are reliable sources from The Jakarta Post. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 08:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 2[edit]
Central Synagogue (Manhattan)
- ... that the roof of New York City's Central Synagogue was rebuilt using surveillance photographs? Source: Barista, Dave (December 2001). "Tradition restored". Building Design & Construction. Vol. 42, no. 12. p. 24.
- ALT1: ... that New York City's Central Synagogue is topped by onions? Source: Prial, Dunstan (September 16, 2001). "Central Synagogue in New York City reopened". Jerusalem Post. Associated Press. p. 7.
- ALT2: ... that New York City's Central Synagogue is topped by onion-shaped domes? Source: Prial, Dunstan (September 16, 2001). "Central Synagogue in New York City reopened". Jerusalem Post. Associated Press. p. 7.
- ALT3: ... that New York City's Central Synagogue has hosted churches and a mosque? Source: Multiple in article
- ALT4: ... that the design of New York City's Central Synagogue was intended to allude to the history of Jews in Muslim countries? Source: Sachs, Susan (August 29, 1998). "A Living History of American Judaism". The New York Times.
- ALT5: ... that Central Synagogue has been continuously used by a congregation for longer than any other synagogue in New York City? Source: Jackson, Kenneth T., ed. (2010). The Encyclopedia of New York City (2nd ed.). New Haven: Yale University Press. p. 226.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tad's Steaks
- Comment: More hook suggestions would be appreciated.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 652 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Epicgenius (talk) 14:34, 2 May 2024 (UTC).
- Substantial interesting article, on its way to FA I assume, on plenty of sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The image is licensed and says better what ALTs 1 and 2 say. The original hook is nothing specific to this treasure. My favourite is ALT3. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:37, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 3[edit]
Lyceum Theatre (Boston)
- ... that Boston's World's Museum featured a "hall of curiosities" which displayed humans with biological rarities, among them albino sisters Florence and Mary Martin (pictured)?
- Source: "At the World's Museum". The Boston Globe. January 26, 1886. p. 8.
- ALT1: ... that Boston's World's Museum was a theatre, an aquarium, a menagerie, and a freak show? Source: "At the World's Museum". The Boston Globe. October 6, 1885. p. 2.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Daniela Kerck
4meter4 (talk) 02:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:39, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline sources. Either hook works. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:07, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Pop Go the Beatles
- ... that the Beatles secretly called the host of their radio show "Pee Litres"?
- Source: https://slate.com/culture/2013/05/pop-go-the-beatles-on-the-bbc-blogging-the-beatles-examines-the-radio-show-video.html "The Beatles would banter semi-mischievously, with host Lee Peters (behind his back, they called him “Pee Litres”)"
- ALT1: ... that the Beatles had their own radio show where they played songs that they never recorded for their albums? Source: https://slate.com/culture/2013/05/pop-go-the-beatles-on-the-bbc-blogging-the-beatles-examines-the-radio-show-video.html
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.The Midnite Wolf (talk) 16:24, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Expanded 5x within a week of nomination. Nominator has less than 5 nominations so no QPQ required. Only a small quibble with ALT1, the article says that the Beatles played songs they never recorded for EMI (as opposed to "for their albums" in the hook), though as far as I know all of the Beatles' albums were recorded with EMI so should be fine. Either way I prefer the primary hook to ALT1. Looks good to go! 🌸wasianpower🌸 (talk • contribs) 03:06, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Aishwarya Rai Bachchan
- ... that Aishwarya Rai Bachchan (pictured) was the first Indian actress to be a juror at Cannes Film Festival?
- ALT1: ... that Bollywood actress Aishwarya Rai Bachchan (pictured) had received four offers to star in movies before being crowned Miss World 1994? Source: https://www.vogue.in/culture-and-living/content/aishwarya-rai-bachchan-bollywood-interesting-unknown-facts
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Keivan.fTalk 18:31, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
- The article is sufficiently long, well-sourced, and highly presentable. The only suggestion I would offer before confirming is to change "female actor" to "actress" and remove "Bollywood actress" from the beginning of the phrase, as it constitutes repetition. MSincccc (talk) 12:01, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
that Aishwarya Rai Bachchan (pictured) was the first Indian actress to be a juror at Cannes Film Festival?
I had prefer this version. Please do make the required changes @Keivan.f. Regards MSincccc (talk) 08:04, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hook has been approved to appear under the Did You Know section for the Main Page. Regards MSincccc (talk) 09:53, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
History of the extraterrestrial life debate
- ... that Plato and Aristotle opposed the idea of extraterrestrial life?
- Source: * Crowe, Michael J. (2008). The extraterrestrial life debate Antiquity to 1915: A Source Book. University of Notre Dame Press. pp. 8–13. ISBN 978-0-268-02368-3.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Phases of ice
- Comment: The article talks about a "plurality of worlds" (meaning, other worlds similar to Earth, including local life, that may exist elsewhere), that's just the ancient way to talk about extraterrestrial life. For the hook it may be better to use the terms that any casual reader may understand.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 117 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Cambalachero (talk) 20:04, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: (t · c) buidhe 00:11, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, it's both things. He didn't think alien life exists, and didn't want (because of his own biases) for it to exist. Yes, perhaps that is faulty logic, but we're talking about ancient Greece. Logic itself was still a recent concept, and some things we know take for granted in discussions (such as a basic scientific method when talking about scientific stuff, or that fallacies make a bad argument) were either new concepts or not created yet. The article makes this clear enough: the way in which the Greeks discussed their ideas, their biases, the slow development of the scientific method, etc. Cambalachero (talk) 17:06, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
North West (rapper)
- ... that North West was originally going to be called Kaidence? Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=qCmcEAAAQBAJ&newbks=0&printsec=frontcover&pg=PA116&dq=%22north+west%22+kaidence&hl=en
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 227 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 12:26, 3 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article created 2 May. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 17:25, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 4[edit]
Party of Labour of Basel
- ... that the Swiss Party of Labour expelled its Basel branch in 1988, after tensions over an occupation movement in the city?
Soman (talk) 11:52, 10 May 2024 (UTC).
- . Article is recently expanded 5x, the sentence is cited, and I see no evidence of transvio. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:26, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Albert Tangora
- ... that Albert Tangora (pictured typing), one of the most successful competitive typewriter speed typists, once had his hands insured for $100,000?
- Comment: If an image of Tangora himself is preferred, File:Albert Tangora in 1938.jpg can be used.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 12 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.B3251 (talk) 17:45, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
- Will review. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:20, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Just need QPQ. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:48, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: QPQ done. Thank you for the review, B3251 (talk) 20:33, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:34, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: QPQ done. Thank you for the review, B3251 (talk) 20:33, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Lin Yu-tang (long jumper)
- ... that long jumper Lin Yu-tang's secret is bringing two pairs of track spikes to competitions, so he can switch shoes between jumps?
- Source: In "Asian Athletics Championships gold in 4th jump: Lin Yutang reveals the secret is to replace old shoes (translated), ""'In fact, my spiked shoes broke after the second jump, and I replaced them with the old spiked shoes, which made me jump with such a good result'. Lin Yutang said in an interview with the Central News Agency: 'I am accustomed to bring two pairs of spiked shoes to prepare for the battle [...]'"
- ALT1: ... that Taiwanese long jumper Lin Yu-tang qualified for the 2024 Summer Olympics by switching out his broken track shoes between attempts?
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- Comment: Open to any hook change ideas, thanks.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Habst (talk) 19:56, 4 May 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting hook. The hook itself is cited in the article and the article does not have any copyright issues. Good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 08:52, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
Guandimiao
- ... that an ancient Chinese village likely had its own local pyromancer?
- Source: Li, Suting; Campbell, Roderick; Hou, Yanfeng (2018). "Guandimiao: A Shang Village Site and Its Significance". Antiquity. 92 (366). doi:10.15184/aqy.2018.176. (p. 1522)
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 45 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:53, 4 May 2024 (UTC).
- New and long enough, no problems, good to go. Cambalachero (talk) 02:32, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
Giant panda
- ... that the distinctive coloration of the giant panda appears to serve as camouflage in both winter and summer?
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Wolverine XI (talk to me) 10:26, 4 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Earwig shows a very high score for some sites, but they seem to be WP mirrors. Everything else is fine. AryKun (talk) 11:39, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 5[edit]
6:16 in LA
- ... that the diss track "6:16 in LA", directed at Drake, samples Al Green's "What a Wonderful Thing Love Is", a song that features Drake's guitarist uncle?
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 12:53, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
- @LunaEclipse: Looks good to me. If I were to make one adjustment, I would clarify that Hodges is a guitarist. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 13:45, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Capitolium of Constantinople
- ... that the Capitolium of Constantinople hosted wine shops?
- Source: Eas vero, quae tam orientali quam occidentali lateri copulantur, quas nulla a platea aditus adque egressus patens pervias facit, veterum usibus popinarum iubebit adscribi. Cod. Theod. XV, 1, 53
- ALT1 ... that the Capitolium of Constantinople, born as a pagan temple, was later topped by a cross?
- Source: The use of the Capitolium at Constantinople as a temple of the Triad can hardly have outlasted the closure of pagan temples in the fourth century, and in the early fifth century it had become Christianized at least to the extent of having a cross placed on the top of it... Crawley Quinn & Wilson (2013), p. 147
- Reviewed: Gingras (instrument)
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Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 82 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Alex2006 (talk) 15:06, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The article is well-written and thoroughly sourced. While the current hook is acceptable, the article could benefit from additional hook options to make it more engaging. QPQ review is pending. el.ziade (talkallam) 14:47, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hallo, @Elias Ziade:, I added a hook and did the QPQ. Cheers, Alex2006 (talk) 07:29, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Alessandro57: for addressing the remaining comments. I am personally not fond of using figures of speech in hooks (temple...born) but the alternative you provided is indeed interesting. I will approve the submission.el.ziade (talkallam) 08:56, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
The Great Mecca Feast
- ... that The Great Mecca Feast by George Krugers (pictured) has been identified as the first documentary film about the hajj pilgrimage?
- Source: Ray, Sandeep (2023). "What Did the Haji Jawa See in Mecca? A Film from 1928 as a Primary Source". Historical Journal of Film, Radio & Television. 43 (4): 1024.
- ALT1: ... that George Krugers (pictured) was circumcised so he could pass as Muslim and film The Great Mecca Feast? Source: Reichling, Rukayyah (2022). "A Colonial Gaze on Mecca: Networks Surrounding the First Documentary about the Hajj". Journal of Material Cultures in the Muslim World. 3: 354.
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Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 659 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:02, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: QPQ done, well-written article, very interesting hook and image is in the public domain. Looks good to go. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:20, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Eve (Stellar Blade)
- ... that Stellar Blade's Eve took design inspiration inspiration from P.N.03's Vanessa Z. Schneider?
- ALT1: ... that Stellar Blade's Eve was described as "a woman born from South Korea’s culture and philosophy" by The Washington Post? Source: [29]
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Kung Fu Man (talk) 15:50, 5 May 2024 (UTC).
- New (to GA status), long enough (at 17491 characters of prose), QPQ (not required). This seems alright for DYK, given the GA status. I would prefer ALT1 btw. JuniperChill (talk) 21:59, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 6[edit]
Reuben Solo
- ... that comedian Reuben Solo drew a graph plotting his audience's reaction to his routine during the routine? Source: "he whips the audience up...before introducing the first of his graphs, plotting reactions to the routine in real time, his grandstanding predictions for what follows directly provoking laughter in the present." – The Scotsman
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Sdkb talk 00:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- New article that was created on 6 May 2024 is 2,548 characters and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (high confidence of violation due to direct quotes that have all been cited; AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 106 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. Ref 4 (verifying the hook) is a reliable source from The Scotsman. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 05:56, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Hind's Hall
- ... that Macklemore's song "Hind's Hall" (cover pictured) refers to the six-year-old Palestinian girl Hind Rajab, who was killed in the Gaza Strip in January 2024?
Makeandtoss (talk) 13:10, 9 May 2024 (UTC).
- Thought I might see this here. You do need to remedy that {{expand}} tag before this can go anywhere.--Launchballer 13:25, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: I've replaced the image of Hind with an image of Macklemore due to it being fair use, sorry :( Pass. 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 14:49, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Laura Veale
- ... that Laura Veale was the first Yorkshire-born woman to be qualified as a doctor?
- Source: Several, including: Harrogate Advertiser: "Hampsthwaite commemorates North Yorkshire’s first female doctor Laura Sobey Veale". Note: This fact has had to be carefully interpreted. It was initially expressed as "the first Yorkshire woman to become a doctor" on the brown plaque, pictured in the article and written by the eminent Harrogate historian Malcolm Neesam. He meant "Yorkshire-born". However it has since been interpreted to mean that she was the first female doctor to practise in Yorkshire, which would be incorrect. Edith Pechey was the first qualified woman doctor to practise in Yorkshire, but she was born in Essex, so to local understanding she was definitely not a "Yorkshire woman" (they are very parochially-minded here). Veale was born in Yorkshire.
- Reviewed: Sonja van den Ende
- Comment: Created in userspace over some weeks from 15 March, then moved to mainspace on 6 May.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 105 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Storye book (talk) 17:49, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- The article was moved to mainspace yesterday, so is new enough. It is far more than long enough and properly uses in-line citations (perhaps even more so than necessary for some sentences). The copyvio detector doesn't find anything other than names of things and quotes that are properly used in the article. The hook is short enough, interesting, and is cited inline. The QPQ has been done and there's no image to review. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 20:41, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Silver seren Re the "even more so than necessary", you'll find that some experienced editors are doing that for a good reason. For example, if you have a "first" in the article, that is going to be automatically questioned and double-checked, and rightly so. Therefore, it is worth finding as many different, independent sources as possible for that "first" and including them all in the article. There is also the fact that some sources may be accessible to some readers (e.g. readers with a subscription, readers in the UK, etc.) and some source may not be accessible to all (e.g. readers outside the UK or without subscription), so it's worth giving them a few alternative sources. A third reason is that various sources give different aspects to the same fact, and some sources also include extra facts which the editor chooses not to include in the article, but which are extremely interesting. In the cast of historical articles, contemporary sources may give the historical standpoint on the matter. Extra sources containing additional facts may also allow other editors to expand the article. Nothing is wasted in this particular article, and there is a reason for everything. Storye book (talk) 08:06, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Yunxian Man
- ... that the skulls of Yunxian Man are "relatively complete" despite being heavily crushed?
- Source: Nature article (ref 1 in article), https://www.nature.com/articles/357404a0
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- Comment: I don't mind if the image isn't used, but I found it very interesting. I will fix the remaining citation needed templates and possibly expand the article more today.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Toadspike (talk) 08:49, 6 May 2024 (UTC).
- Looks to be easily verifiable, but "relatively complete" should be mentioned somewhere in the wiki article. While I would prefer the article be organized into sections, I don't think that's a requirement for DYK. Just resolve the "citation needed" issues first before I approve it. And yes, I do see the comment. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:39, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- Toadspike I would suggest that the first sentence should mention Yunxian Man, otherwise the article may fail the presentability test. I notice that the article was moved this morning, so it may be a work in progress. TSventon (talk) 15:55, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you both for your comments, I have improved the article to resolve them. It is still a little bit of a work in progress, as there is a lot more information in the sources than I originally anticipated, but I'm going for DYK, not GA, so it should be okay as is :D Toadspike (talk) 12:13, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- The article quality's a start, so I'll approve for DYK. PrimalMustelid (talk) 15:59, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you both for your comments, I have improved the article to resolve them. It is still a little bit of a work in progress, as there is a lot more information in the sources than I originally anticipated, but I'm going for DYK, not GA, so it should be okay as is :D Toadspike (talk) 12:13, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Toadspike I would suggest that the first sentence should mention Yunxian Man, otherwise the article may fail the presentability test. I notice that the article was moved this morning, so it may be a work in progress. TSventon (talk) 15:55, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Fang Yi'ai
- ... that the Tang dynasty politician Fang Yi'ai, together with his wife Princess Gaoyang, rebelled against Emperor Gaozong of Tang, but their rebellion was swiftly suppressed, resulting in their deaths? Source: 玄武门实录 (in Chinese). Beijing Book Co. Inc. 1 June 2017. ISBN 978-7-5168-1411-6.
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.TheGreatPeng (talk) 10:01, 6 May 2024 (UTC).
- Review below, fascinating work!
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Overall: AGF on foreign language sources – I was able to Google Translate the source page to confirm it, but because that's not a perfect translation, the AGF stands. Proposing a slight rewording in the ALT below to increase hookiness, but either would work. Nomader (talk) 14:27, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the Tang dynasty politician Fang Yi'ai was put to death and his wife Princess Gaoyang was forced to commit suicide after their failed rebellion against Emperor Gaozong of Tang?
Articles created/expanded on May 7[edit]
Lie Kiat Teng
- ... that Lie Kiat Teng (pictured) appealed to doctors' "moral obligation" to address a healthcare crisis in South Sulawesi?
- Source: Murakami, Saki (2014). "Call for Doctors!: Uneven Medical Provision and the Modernization of State Health Care during the Decolonization of Indonesia, 1930s–1950s". In Freek Colombijn; Joost Coté (eds.). Cars, Conduits, and Kampongs: The Modernization of the Indonesian City, 1920–1960. Verhandelingen van het Koninklijk Instituut voor Taal-, Land- en Volkenkunde. Vol. 295. Leiden. p. 56. ISBN 9789004280724.
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Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 660 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:53, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- Length, date, qpq, hook, close paraphrase check ok, image free on commons. --Soman (talk) 11:17, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Terror Train
- ... that when producer Daniel Grodnik proposed the idea for Terror Train to his wife, she thought it sounded terrible?
- Source: Grove, David (2015). Jamie Lee Curtis: Scream Queen. Albany, Georgia: BearManor Media. ISBN 978-1-59393-608-2. OCLC 840902442. (no page numbers because google books lacks pagination, and it's not available anywhere else online)
- ALT1: ... that the killer in the slasher film Terror Train was played by a Canadian cross-dressing performer with little knowledge about films? Source: Grove, David (2015). Jamie Lee Curtis: Scream Queen. Albany, Georgia: BearManor Media. ISBN 978-1-59393-608-2. OCLC 840902442. (no page numbers because google books lacks pagination, and it's not available anywhere else online)
- ALT2: ... that the train set in Terror Train was a real Canadian Pacific Railway locomotive? Source: Rockoff, Adam (2016). Going to Pieces: The Rise and Fall of the Slasher Film, 1978–1986. McFarland. ISBN 978-0-786-49192-6. Page 94
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Catalogue of Works of Carl Friedrich Abel
- Comment: Image should be used for ALT 2. Nominated upon request of author
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 17:21, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I wouldn't go with the image, personally, as ALT2 is the weakest. I prefer ALT1. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:18, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Jeffrey Veregge
- ... that S'Klallam artist Jeffrey Veregge's "Salish Geek" style blended traditional formline art techniques with bright colors and pop culture references? Source: Flores, Agueda Pacheco (2020-05-12). "Seattle World's Fair meets 'Salish geek' in new (virtual) art show". Crosscut. Retrieved 2024-05-05.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.ThadeusOfNazereth(he/him)Talk to Me! 11:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Always awesome to see more articles on Indigenous topics and personalities on Wikipedia! Everything seems to check out. It's new enough, long enough, sourced and neutral. Earwig detects no plagiarism. Hook is cited and interesting! QPQ has been completed! Cheers! Ornithoptera (talk) 21:14, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Kortnei Johnson
- ... that Kortnei Johnson (pictured) became a seven-time state sprinting champion for the University Interscholastic League, despite training on grass and cement since her hometown of Italy, Texas, lacked a running track? Source: In "No track, no problem for Class 2A Italy’s Kortnei Johnson, now at LSU", In fact, the medals she won at the Class 2A state high school championships at Myers — seven of them gold — hang from a wall in her apartment in Baton Rouge.
Original: ... that Kortnei Johnson (pictured) became a seven-time Texas UIL state sprinting champion despite training on grass and cement, as her home town of Italy, Texas, lacked a running track to train on?- ALT1: ... that Kortnei Johnson (pictured) became a seven-time state sprinting champion for the University Interscholastic League, despite training on grass and cement since her hometown of Italy, Texas, lacked a running track?
- Reviewed: No needed.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Habst (talk) 20:25, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
Comment: I added an alternative hook since the American state is mentioned twice so it won't be classified as redundancy. Also, "home town" is combined since it's one word.
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Overall: Good nomination hook, added a comment about it (look above), and no-unlikely violation from Earwig. Good job. — JuanGLP (talk/contribs) 02:55, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- @JuanGLP, thank you, I prefer your hook so I have struck mine. Also, the reason for "unlikely" from Earwig is because the 22.5% similarity is coming from a quote in the "Career" section, properly enclosed in quotes and attributed via citation. Let me know if there's anything else I can do. Thanks, --Habst (talk) 17:40, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Jacob Christiaan Koningsberger
- ... that Jacob Christiaan Koningsberger, a biologist who catalogued the flora and fauna of Java, also served as the Minister of the Colonies of the Netherlands?
- Source: Catalogued flora and fauna: Goss, Andrew (2009). "Decent Colonialism? Pure Science and Colonial Ideology in the Netherlands East Indies, 1910-1929". Journal of Southeast Asian Studies. 40 (1): 201.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 661 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:41, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- New article that was moved to mainspace on 7 May 2024 is 6,909 characters and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (high confidence of violation due to publication titles; AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 156 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. Refs 2 and 4 (verifying the hook) are reliable sources. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 04:30, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Peggy Pond Church
- ... that poet Peggy Pond Church became a strong pacifist and Society of Friends member after the Manhattan Project used her home as a place to build nuclear weapons?
- Source: "Late in 1942 it was announced that the school would be closed in order that the Manhattan Project could be carried out there...What angered her chiefly was the research on the atomic bomb and its testing and use...Church became a pacifist, and in 1948 she and her husband joined the Society of Friends." - Southwestern Women Writers and the Vision of Goodness
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Laura Veale
- Comment: The article was moved from draftspace to mainspace in this edit.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 117 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.SilverserenC 20:53, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- New article that was moved to mainspace on 7 May 2024 is 7,830 characters and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 161 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. AGF book for ref 1 (verifying the hook) which has no preview available but can still be searched (all three quotes check out). QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 04:04, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 8[edit]
Brad Banducci
- ... that Brad Banducci stepped down as CEO of the Woolworths Group after walking out of a TV interview, causing national headlines in Australia?
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.GMH Melbourne (talk) 07:03, 8 May 2024 (UTC).
- The article was moved to mainspace today, so is new enough. At just over 1800 characters, it is long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds nothing outside of groups and positions. The hook is interesting and cited inline. The QPQ has been done. The only thing I'll note is that there's certainly sources out there to beef up the article more, including recent contempt threats and just older general news articles about him. Anyways, looks good to go. SilverserenC 00:54, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
John Wilson (Arkansas politician)
- ... that John Wilson was expelled from the Arkansas House of Representatives for killing another representative in a knife fight?
- Source: [30]
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Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.QuicoleJR (talk) 23:51, 8 May 2024 (UTC).
Article seems in a good enough state all around. The hook checks out and is certainly good enough; I might mentioned that he was reelected to the house afterwards though! Left some comments on the talk on how this article might be improved or expanded. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:54, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
69 (number)
- ... that the number 69 is nice?
- Source: Intelligencer
- ALT1: ... that 69 is the only natural number whose square (4761) and cube (328509) use every digit (from 0–9) exactly once? Source: Power Play. Mathematical Association of America. p. 126. ISBN 9780883855232.
- ALT2: ... that 69 is the largest number whose factorial is less than a googol? Source: A First Course in Mathematical Analysis. Cambridge University Press. p. 303. ISBN 9781139458955
- ALT3: ... that 69 follows 68? Source: A priori
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/A Charge to Keep I Have
- Comment: ALT3 is totally the best one frfr
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Template:LunaEatsTunaSig (talk), posted at 21:52, 8 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: A very nice GA and hook. Hopefully the approvers will accept ALT0. Skyshiftertalk 22:25, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0 would need quotes for "nice" (and if I had my way, the whole hook would be "that 69 is "nice"").--Launchballer 01:33, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 9[edit]
German Mission House
- ... that over the course of several decades, the missionaries of German Mission House (pictured) failed to convert a single person?
- Source: King, Michael; Morrison, Robin (1990). A Land Apart: The Chatham Islands of New Zealand. Auckland: Random House New Zealand. (https://archive.org/details/landapartchatham0000king) pp. 59-62
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:06, 9 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article was created on the same day as nomination. Article meets adequate quality standards and contains enough prose for DYK, my only suggestions are for "the western end of the building" to be potentially reworded just due to similarity in the source, and for the double space in the 'History' section to be fixed. Very interesting hook! I took a look at the source and I noticed that it had mentioned "Moriori, Maori, or Pakeha" (meaning the missionaries failed to convert Indigenous or European New Zealanders) and I'm wondering if this, or the fact that this took place in New Zealand, would be worth mentioning in the hook as well. Picture is relevant to the hook. QPQ done. Great work on the article! Please ping when concerns have been addressed. Thanks, B3251 (talk) 20:30, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- @B3251:
Ooh, good catch! Fixed this in the article. For the hook, I generally try to condense the hooks as much as I can, but. ALT1": ... that over the course of several decades, the missionaries of New Zealand's German Mission House (pictured) failed to convert a single person?" could work! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 00:32, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good. I just wanted to suggest any sort of inclusion of New Zealand in the hook so that there wouldn't be any confusion with the building having "German" in its name. Good to go now. :) B3251 (talk) 01:05, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 10[edit]
Xenophon of Robeika
- ... that when his vita was lost, the life story of Xenophon of Robeika had to be rewritten?
--evrik (talk) 20:07, 10 May 2024 (UTC).
- Wow, I love this hook. Article is long enough and 5x expanded as of today, Earwig finds no copyvio, sourcing looks good and I'm AGFing on the languages I can't read (DeepL translation shows me it lines up). Hook is cited, again AGF because I can't be certain, given that I can't read Russian, and your QPQ is good. Zanahary (talk) 21:47, 10 May 2024 (UTC) -->
Tad's Steaks
- ... that Tad's Steaks offered "tasty food, low prices, service with a grunt"?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Southern Railway Building
- Comment: This was inspired by Sammi Brie's recent Ground Round submission. And, not really a COI, but I do have fond memories of my father taking me to lunch at the Union Square Tad's when I was a kid and he brought me to work with him.
RoySmith (talk) 16:27, 10 May 2024 (UTC).
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- Other problems: - Per WP:NYPOST, the NY Post is a generally unreliable source. Much as I don't agree with the decision, there was a consensus that the NYP isn't reliable. I suggest replacing it.
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Overall: @RoySmith: Nice work. There is only one issue with this nomination, which I've mentioned above. Epicgenius (talk) 17:17, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
OK, NY Post references removed, thanks for the review. RoySmith (talk) 17:34, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go now. Epicgenius (talk) 20:40, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Ola Labib
- ... that prior to becoming "the UK’s only Black, Muslim, Sudanese female comedian", Ola Labib had been a pharmacist who had never been inside a pub before her first gig? Source: https://www.chortle.co.uk/comics/o/34535/ola_labib/review for quote, https://wepresent.wetransfer.com/stories/work-sucks-i-know-ola-labib for pharmacist, https://www.bbc.com/news/newsbeat-68713194 for pub stuff
- ALT1: ... that Ola Labib played the UK's first socially distanced comedy show? Source: https://www.chortle.co.uk/features/2020/07/30/46601/its_good_to_be_back!_inside_the_uks_first_comedy_club_gig_for_four_months
- ALT2: ... that the opening line of the hijabi comedian Ola Labib's first stand-up set implied that she was the first hooded figure to be seen entering a pub since Frodo Baggins at the Prancing Pony? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/stage/2023/may/11/ola-labib-sudanese-comic
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Centurion C-RAM
Launchballer 18:34, 10 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: New enough, long enough. Earwig detects 51.6% match due to a cited passage in the article so that is not a problem. Quotes that result in a match are cited. The hooks are cited and are interesting. Preference for ALT0 and ALT2. QPQ has been completed! Great work, cheers! Ornithoptera (talk) 19:15, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Yangliujie Catholic Church
- ... that the Chinese Red Army housed its political directorate in a Catholic church (pictured) in 1935?
- Source: See Huang, Xian (2021-01-30). 遵义会议会址确认记 [Confirmation of the Site of the Zunyi Conference]. People's Daily Overseas Edition 人民日报海外版 (in Chinese). or Pan, Kaimao (2012). 遵义会议期间红军总政治部旧址简介 [Site of the Political Directorate of the Chinese Red Army during the Zunyi Conference]. Zhongguo Diming 中国地名. No. 05. p. 13..
Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 11:51, 10 May 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, presentable, well-sourced, no copyvio, hook cited and QPQ done. Uriel1022 (talk) 16:47, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Shirley Warde
- ... that actress Shirley Warde first began starring in play productions at the age of six?
- ALT1: ... that actress Shirley Warde not only starred in theater and movies, but also wrote scripts for plays and radio and short stories for magazines? Source: "Here's An Actress Who Writes Fiction" - Brooklyn Times Union and "A Stage Scarlet Lady Displays Other Tints" - Brooklyn Times Union
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Brad Banducci
- Comment: The article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
SilverserenC 01:01, 10 May 2024 (UTC).
- Looks good to me, long enough, new enough, good sourcing and well written. I think ALT1 is more interesting as a hook. Luiysia (talk) 17:13, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Simon de Graaff
- ... that Simon de Graaff designed and implemented a plan to divide Java in three?
- Source: Fasseur, C. "Graaff, Simon de (1861-1948)" (in Dutch). Huygens Institute for the History of the Netherlands. Archived from the original on 31 October 2019. Retrieved 9 May 2024.
- ALT1: ... that, as minister, Simon de Graaff would receive daily shipments of documents by bicycle? Source: Fasseur, C. "Graaff, Simon de (1861-1948)" (in Dutch). Huygens Institute for the History of the Netherlands. Archived from the original on 31 October 2019. Retrieved 9 May 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Terror Train
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:19, 10 May 2024 (UTC).